Aaaand, I bring moar fic

Jul 22, 2009 23:01

Ace has hijacked my brain, can you tell?

In which Ace comes home from training and Luffy is hyperactive )

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naye July 23 2009, 05:01:50 UTC
Eheheheee~! Brains hijacked by Ace bring the good stuff! \o/

So much love for all of this! Ace's exhaustion after Garp's "training", and Makino taking care, and Ace being grateful and Luffy being loud.

The little we see about Ace's relationship with Shanks is interesting, too - clever conniving bastard. It's full of grudging admiration, and maybe a little bit of resentment - a great take on the subject.

Luffy trying to be quiet was incredibly adorable, and then Ace's determination...! The fact that they can be rivals and brothers both, without it changing their bond. The fact that they didn't choose to follow the same dream, but are both living their own dreams to the fullest... Yeah, that's our brothers D. ♥

And of course, Luffy and the glass of milk and Makino - awwwwwww! *g*

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eiliem July 23 2009, 05:16:28 UTC
^__^

I hope we do get a scene with Ace and Shanks, because...well, so many reasons because! Because Shanks shaped Luffy so much, because Shanks wanted to protect Ace when he was chasing Kurohige, because Shanks did his apprenticeship on Ace's Dad's ship!

*Is sooo excited* &hearts!

The fact that they can be rivals and brothers both, without it changing their bond. The fact that they didn't choose to follow the same dream, but are both living their own dreams to the fullest... Yeah, that's our brothers D.

D'awww, yes! They are so awesome that way.

And of course, Luffy and the glass of milk and Makino

lol - Shanks you have so much to answer for *shakes head* but we love you anyways!

(actually the milk thing reminded me of FMA, lol, because Edward. Will not. Drink. Milk. XP)

fic has kidnapped my brainz and is thoroughly taking advantage of them (in a mostly good way) ~_^

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shayera July 23 2009, 07:25:13 UTC
I love that the Ace-virus has hit you too! And you're writing fic! And it's good!! ^______^

Very nice take on Ace's return from wherever and finding Shanks gone and Luffy filled with new dreams. And hyperactive, while Ace just wants to get some food and rest. And Makino is taking care, and Luffy is being Luffy and Ace falls asleep on his food! ♥

And yeah. Different lives, different dreams, but that doesn't change a thing.

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eiliem July 23 2009, 17:08:48 UTC
And yeah. Different lives, different dreams, but that doesn't change a thing.

A) Oda is a scary freakin genius to tell us so much about Ace from just his short appearance in Alabasta

B) wanttoknowwhatAcethinksofShanks!!!! Oda! Answers!

Also: ...he is eating ma brainz!! o_o

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shayera July 23 2009, 17:24:24 UTC
That appearance of just a few chapters WAY back when it tells us so much about who Ace is and what makes him tick! And then some 400 chapters later, we get concentrated angst from Ace, so it turned out to be important that we got to see him in his "normal" mode. :D (and it makes us care all the more, because we know what kind of a person he actually is!)

Still, I would like some kind of childhood flashback. We did get a few panels, but I want MOAR. And that would need to include Ace&Shanks, because - that's INTERESTING! If Shanks really came to Fuusha to see Ace - what happened? (Luffy happened!?)

(Remember what Shanks told Rayleigh right after coming back from East Blue? "I met a kid who said the same things the Captain used to!" And it wasn't Roger's son...)

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eiliem July 24 2009, 01:31:57 UTC
We did get a few panels

And I want the context for those panels!!!!

flashbackflashbackflashbackflashback - plz Oda!

Although...at the same time I think I'll die of suspense if it happens now @_@

AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH

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roseveare July 23 2009, 21:14:53 UTC
Ahahaha I love that Ace fell asleep in his food in the middle. :D So cute and IC!

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eiliem July 24 2009, 01:29:43 UTC
Haha - yes, if there is food, Ace will somehow contrive to end up face-first in it XP

Glad you liked it!

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