- The Meme In Which You Give Concrit -

[mykindasong]

Okay, ignore that we're ignoring the usual set-up. It's just not the way we roll! Don't worry, the same things can still happen.

Welcome to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.Rules are simple, because we like it that way

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[anonymous]

 

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[hibinoasami]

hibinoasami

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[anonymous]

I'm going anon because I don't want you to hate on me. Lol.

I like your stories. I love your plots. They're really cute and interesting. And some of the angst -that you have written- clenches my heart.

Sometimes, I spot a few mistakes in your writing. Not so much though, just a few. Like you mix up between past and present tense and there are a few grammatical errors. Try to proof read your writing once you're done or get someone to beta? :)

Overall, your writing is pretty good and it gives me all the emotions I need to feel.

So, keep on writing. You're one of the writers that write my fave pairs and stop being lazy, yo. XD ♥

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[hibinoasami]

lol i wont hate anybody except for those who claimed Taiyou as theirs

thank you for the comment :) i know i need a beta, i just dunno how to find one~

i hope i could improve my bad english but i hate grammar am still confused with some things like you said, the tenses :(

i will keep on writing, that's my only way to keep Shoon and Yabu together since lotsa people forgot about that pairing existence :D

....i know you right? XD

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[anonymous]

Just post up a request for beta at jent. 8D

...yes. you know me XD

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[hibinoasami]

oh so we could request for a beta at jent_fanfic? wow never know that XD

thanks for telling me that :)

...yappari XD

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[anonymous]

I don't think I should be anon for this thread.But I will..

I like your stories so far, no problem with that. but it's just you should update regularly.

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[hibinoasami]

i know, i have problems with updating. really.

thanks for commenting :D

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[anonymous]

ิbeing anonymous is funny

Sorry that I didn't read your recent YAMABU fic, because I'm not in with that OTP. And I don't want to pretend liking it.

I read your first fic, JE turns to be uke just for a week. It's amazing. Your imagination go far and amazing. Your plot is so interesting, and that's the reason why I enjoy reading so much.

But, too much smut isn't good for my health, and waste my bunch of tissue boxes too. lol.

Do your best. I know you can improve more and more.

Thank you for writing fic.

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[hibinoasami]

i think so too

That's okay, at least you didnt hate Shoon, rite?

Ugh. That's fic was kinda lame but i love the plot. So i will edit that fic to got a better grammar and stuff and will post it once more :)

lol well, i still think my life need more smut XD

thank you for commenting anon-san, it made my day ^^
thanks for commenting here ~ ♥

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[crazy_otaku911]

I tried out one of your drabble sets and I didn't get very far. I'm not really going to say anything content-wise because... I didn't get very far. From the little I did read, I think what you need most is a beta. There was a lot of improper wording and tenses going on. You didn't sound too bad, but with the amount of errors, it's hard to read through.

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[hibinoasami]

i got that alot, and i always thinking to get a beta, but where and how? :(

it worries me as well that i never beta my fic but i'm grateful there's someone who still read my fic~

thanks for commenting ^^

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[anonymous]

Like what crazy_otaku911 said, all you need is a good beta. You have the potential, but you really need someone to beta for you. =)

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[hibinoasami]

i'll search for one, really. it bothers me as well XD

thanks for dropping by~

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[omoikkiri]

If you're still searching for a beta, you might try je_beta also.

Henso Shite

[hensoshite]

hensoshite
I doubt anyone is all that aware of my writing but I'll join in anyway :P