- The Meme In Which You Give Concrit -

[mykindasong]

Okay, ignore that we're ignoring the usual set-up. It's just not the way we roll! Don't worry, the same things can still happen.

Welcome to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.Rules are simple, because we like it that way

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[anonymous]

 

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[changetje]

changetje @ euphoricfields

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[anonymous]

seriously, you wrote the most amazing fics I ever read! I really like your style, how you describe the characters and their feelings...

I particularly like Lullaby (let me sleep), Don't stop believing, Love is simple with you,...

keep up with the good work! *hearts*

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[anonymous]

I remember reading your PIN fics and LOVING THEM to the point of recommending it to a lot of people!
I love the way you describe them, they're so much themselves. And, in the fics I read, Jin was topping, another thing I LOVE and I don't see that often, sigh.

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[isolated_killer]

Oh, I love your style of writing. You're a lovely author)

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[crazy_otaku911]

crazy_otaku911 @ pocky_addiction

Sweep me off my feet~ Or...you know. Knock them out from under me. Whichever tips your cow. ^^

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[anonymous]

I think the only fic of yours I've read was the Shoon/Massu one (you write mostly juniors/young people I don't normally read). It was cute! I love the way you demonstrated Tegoshi and Takaki's need for attention at the end.

The only other thing I have to say about it is the bright pink italics are a bit distracting.

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[crazy_otaku911]

Thanks! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Annnd that was not supposed to happen. =| Thank you. I just changed the layout and I meant to disable the custom comment page. Fixed and thank you!

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[anonymous]

You already know what I think about your writing (and you'll recognize me as soon as I post this). I love your very delicate way of describing feelings and situations. I love more deep thoughts and speculations than actions - that's why I love your fics so much and I would read everything you write.

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[crazy_otaku911]

Now...why are you going anon? xD ♥

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[anonymous]

Lol, it's fun sometimes 8D

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[chii_loves_me]

I don't see the point of going anon, coz I have nothing to criticize . :D

You're awesome, and all your fics (that I have read so far) are flail-worthy.
I love your writing style because it really gets through to me. Especially the angst. Love the angst babeh. ♥

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[crazy_otaku911]

Awww! Thank you so much! ♥ )8

[omoikkiri]

Ready for some real concrit? ^^

I agree, to some extent, with what was said here. One suggestion for improvement would be to pay more attention to the overall structure of your stories, in terms of developing a solid buildup → climax → denouement. I don't get that feeling of something driving me to some Major Point in your stories, and in some of your older fics (at least a year ago), I would even find myself skimming through because there wasn't any tension to hold me down to the words. This is not to say that you don't have a point to each of your story - you do - just that... (hmm I'm not entirely sure what the best way to "fix" this would be, since I have trouble putting proper amounts of tension/climax into my fics too; yes I am Pot and you can be Kettle :D) Perhaps you could try to vary the pace and tone of different parts within a story? You tend to be very even throughout a story, when it helps sometimes to speed things up when you're getting to the climax, etc

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[chocbiggestfan1]

chocbiggestfan1

i'm new at this so i need all the criticism i can get :)
but please be gentle...?
thanks :D

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[catacombkid]

catacombkid