[It Feels So Real: American Idol; David Cook/Michael Johns; 4,800 words]

[oncebelieved]

Title: It Feels So Real
Author: peridium
Fandom: American Idol (Season 7)
Word Count: ~4,800
Pairing: David Cook/Michael Johns; David Archuleta with an unrequited crush on David Cook
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Trust me, I do not own any of these people. They belong to themselves.
Summary: David Archuleta can't help having a crush on David Cook; who could?

Comments

[blindmadness]

FIRST COMMENT FIRST COMMENT WHEEEEE

5894052 people have said this, but ugh, the Archievoice. <3333 It's so perfect, just the right mix of awkward without being obnoxiously so and I can hear him saying half of these things and it really is just like watching him narrate it and I love it. ♥

...was that watching David Cook kind of came with watching Michael Johns, as a package deal. Like when you order at a fast food restaurant and they end up giving you fries even if you don't want them because it's the combo? Kind of like that.

This seriously made me giggle out loud. FRIES.

The conversation with Michael and babyDavid is so ADORABLE, Michael's so cutely obnoxious and poor awkward babyDavid and DCOOK'S GRIN, UGH. <3333 And I love how Archie's accepted from him but not Michael, poor MJ. XD

Michael will do something awful, like trying to switch the salt with the sugar, and David will be the only one who laughs as one of the others is pitching a fit, and it'll be completely obvious by Michael's triumphant smile that he only really did

[peridium]

UM, SO I KIND OF LOVE YOU? <33333333333

I really do want to write more. :DDD I hope I get the chance to soon.

[blindmadness]

I LOVE YOU TOO. ^______^ <33333333333

I HOPE YOU DO TOOOOO. I WILL ENCOURAGE AND ENABLE AND CHEER YOU ON. \o/

[cherrymaryberry]

Wow, this was GREAT!! I love seeing Michael and David from other people's point of view.

Fantastic.

[peridium]

Thank you! ♥ It was fun to attempt to get into Archie's head.

[malicat]

awwww,poor Archie *lol*

I loved this story,it was all kinds of adorable ♥

[peridium]

I kind of had a little too much fun torturing him. But thank youuu! :D

[sleepingfear]

ACK WOW.

this was probably the best Mavid fic i've read. most well-written, and great plot line. putting it through archie's eyes? brilliant.

you rock and rule.

[peridium]

jfklds oh, wow, thank you so much! <33 What an insanely nice comment to get.

[talytalus]

Really enjoyed this. I think this is the only way I can stomach Cookleta - as unrequited puppy love. It was very refreshing to me, to read Mavid seen from Archie's perspective.
Very well done.

[peridium]

Yeah, it takes a really good story to make me actually enjoy David/David when it's mutual. It's kind of adorable as an unrequited crush, though, so it was fun to write. :D

Thank so much! ♥