Ring Around the Rosie, Chapter 3/?

[onabearskinrug]

Title: Ring Around the Rosie
Author: onabearskinrug
Character/Pairing: Ten/Rose with Jack, Mickey, Jake, Pete, Jackie, and others
Rating: Teen for language, rating will most likely increase in future chapters. Look who you're talking to.
Summary: Very AU!! The Doctor and Jack are stranded in London when the TARDIS malfunctions. Obviously, the only thing to do

Comments

[onabearskinrug]

THANK YOU! You're so awesome :-) I am writing! Maybe I'll have something for you this weekend!

[fogsblue]

Adore the way the Doctor is still drawn to Rose. And their little interaction in the car with the mind reading was sweet and very them.

I know there's a mystery to be solved, but I keep focussing on the Doctor and Rose interacting... My bad ;)

[onabearskinrug]

Thank you! No, you can focus on them. Their interactions are important *hint hint wink wink* :-D

[kelkat9]

Like Who_in_whoville, I love the psychic stuff in the car. It just makes me smile! I also love how you are revealing little bits of the case each chapter - it really draws the reader into the mystery. Oh and the end was awesome! I definitely got the Oncoming Storm vibe!

[onabearskinrug]

He can still be scary even when he's stranded on Earth :-D

Thank you my darling! I'm off to write...need to take my mind off that job application...

[othermewriter]

Just not smart to tick off the resident Time Lord! Love the whole set of interactions between the Doctor and Rose her quip about the driving hazard was quite cute, though personally I think just having him in the car with me might be a mite distracting.

[onabearskinrug]

You have a point...I don't think I could be held responsible for my actions with that lovely, lovely alien in the car with me :-D

[fannishliss]

I love the characterization of the Doctor and his interactions with Rose in this chapter. I love especially how capable she is and how much that attracts him to her.

The little hints of the AU are very interesting!

Yay puzzle rings! :D

[onabearskinrug]

Thank you!!!! The puzzle rings would not be the awesomeness that they are without you, you silly genius! :-D Off to write more!!!!