Oh, damn. The way the house isolated them, had them keeping secrets, then crept into their cracks and forced them open and then shoved them back together for this. *shivers* Nicely done.
Gahhh. I just wanted to say that The Secret Garden influences were very nicely incorporated into your story...although I can't read anymore unfortunately cos I was really hoping this story would have Dean in the role of of the more dominant one...but you have it the other way around. Oh well - this is nothing against your story, I just have my preferences,lol.
But again, I just want to say that of what I did read, you did a great job creating imagery :D
Haha, whereas I almost need advance warning for bottom!Sam. Depending on the author, it can even throw me right out of a story. Glad you were enjoying otherwise!
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But again, I just want to say that of what I did read, you did a great job creating imagery :D
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