Beginners Luck! // Beginners!

Aug 11, 2012 20:36

I'd like to place all the blame on risakochan, crazy_otaku911, and damagea, my Enablers ♥.

Beginners Luck! (AKA "Beginners Fuck")
Tachibana Danji/Shimura Teppei
R, 2216 words, pwp
Set at the end of the second episode of Beginners. Angry sex by the pool at night. [(see screencaps)]
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%oneshot, kitayama hiromitsu, fujigaya taisuke

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damagea August 12 2012, 07:28:00 UTC
I'm more than happyyyyyyyyyy to be one of the enablers! ♥ IF THIS WAS THE RESULT... holy fuck, i'll be your best enabler in the future too! 8DDDDD because can i flail for a second now?! OKAY here it comes: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA KARAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WHAT IS LIFE OMG IT'S BEGINNERS AND OMG IT'S SEX BY THE POOLSIDE AND IT'S DAN-SAN AND TEPPEI AND DAN-SAN IS SO COCKY AND TEPPEI IS SO ANNOYING AND THEY ARE SO HOT AND WHAT IS AIRRRRRRRRR. +_______________+;;;;;; ...okay. 8D

i pretty much cracked at "Beginners Fuck!!" here. but the title is good and fitting haha! and then the whole fic, holy shittttt i was supposed to write a looong comment but i feel like i have no words to describe my feelings right now. ::D i'm like all HYPER here now and being all "AAAAAAAAAAA" again and again. and i actually read this already twice because i was so hyper while reading this for the first time that i was afraid i'm going to miss something. XD

dealing with teppei's virginity wasn't bad at all! HE'S SO VIRGIN and omg i liked the reference about 'peach' there. and dan-san was so... dan-san. ♥ i'm amazed how you pulled off the characters so well because they were SO THEM. since usually many drama-AUs tend to describe those JE boys and their personality but this one definitely had dan-san and teppei instead kitafuji. 8D AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. and then teppei says a stupid comment in the end and i was a bit ":|||" for a second or two but i'm sure he will find out a way to make it up to dan-san! :D and it was so teppei anyway to say something stupid instead being all cuddly with dan-san because... well, no way those two would lose their pride to something like that. XD MAYBE SOMEDAY.

omgggggggggggggggg i'm still wanting to read this again and again and again and again. 8D IT WAS HOT GDI. so frigging hot. +________+;;; i finally got my porn and i'm very very very satisfied here now. (well okay, of course i'll end up wanting even more but this definitely help for my lackness of porn. XD) you write so well. :| it was hot. :| and i enjoyed it. :| a lot. ♥

i'm totally satisfied here now but YOU SHOULD WRITE MOAR OF THOSE TWO. beginners is love and so are those two. <3________<3 i mean, i'd be really happy if you wrote more, that is. 8DDDDD omg what is lifeeeeeee. what is airrrrrrr. D_____D;;; *___________* @_______@ *spams with all weird smileys describing the mixture of her feelings*

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu. ♥ D_____D i will read this again NOW. XD

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omoikkiri August 13 2012, 07:33:03 UTC
Wait, are you ready? Here I go: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ANNIKAAAAAAA XD ♥

I think I've read your comments as many times as you've read this fic ;A; and it makes me grin so hard idek. dak;sg;lam IDEK. How am I supposed to reply to an awesome comment like this? v__v

I'mmm also super happy to hear that about my characterization of Danji and Teppei! and lol the virginity talk... you should see the bit I took out from their conversation about Teppei's virginity lmao it was so ridiculous /)_- (I'll leave you a screened comment after this with the bit~)

Making up it up to Danji: I had episode 5 in mind, since I wrote this after seeing the previews from the new Ousama no Brunch. SO UH, TEPPEI YOU BETTER COME TO DAN-SAN'S RESCUE D:

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