Ten Below Blazing // Kis-My-Ft2
Ten Below Blazing
Yokoo/Fujigaya
PG, 724 words, robot AU
A/N: For noella84, if she still wants it, as it ended up being the farthest thing possible from her prompt lmao. :3♥?
( Instead of soft skin, the texture underneath his fingers is cold, hard metal. )
Yokoo/Fujigaya
PG, 724 words, robot AU
A/N: For noella84, if she still wants it, as it ended up being the farthest thing possible from her prompt lmao. :3♥?
( Instead of soft skin, the texture underneath his fingers is cold, hard metal. )
I love the concept of this!
also really like the lead in. the coolness of Fujigaya-Robo's skin becomes even more chilling after you talk about the temperature and it being cold. also the slightly foreboding feeling you get when you read how much he sticks out. and Yokoo's surprise/shock upon the discovery.
I really like how Yokoo is caught up in the "he's a robot" and "but he looks so human" conflict and confusion and his other conflicting feelings you hint at so nicely :D
the last sentence is awesome and rounds this off nicely. hot and cold~
it reads like the prologue to something longer. is there more? :D or will there be?
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ittttt was not intended to go on, but tbh I always have so much more of every AU in my head, it just depends on whether or not I manage to get it out in words. (plus with all the different ideas going on in my head, it also ends up being a matter of which one survives and interests me long enough heh) but since a couple of people have asked me if there will be more of this AU, I... might be a sucker for public opinion and write more of it ahaha 8D
anyway thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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ooh I totally know what you mean! I wrote AU stuff recently, too and everyone loved it so much but I have no clue how to continue because I hadn't thought beyond what I had written yet XD;;
I really enjoy your fics :3
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haha I actually have a general idea of the stories for every AU in my head, I just... am too lazy to flesh out the details and write them out lol. what a good writer I am :| (this one for instance is all about how Fuji's AI is slightly faulty so that he has a temper, and how he can understand most emotions except the most complicated ones (love, etc), and Yokoo's inner conflict but XD writing is so much work!)
:''3
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there's also a manga (that came out over here at around the time of the movie I reckon) where one chapter deals with A.I.s "Neiji" by Kaori Yuki
^_^
mh usually I have a plan for fics too but this one time it just...ran away. ahaha XD;
I'm too lazy to write longer stuff, too usually =v= so I can understand!
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