fic | 5 Kisses That Paved Morgana’s Path To Hell | Morgana/Everyone | pg-13

Jul 08, 2009 17:52

Title: 5 Kisses That Paved Morgana’s Path To Hell.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 817
Pairing: Morgana/Everyone (i.e. Arthur, Uther, Mordred, Merlin, Gwen)
Summary: Before he could speak, she kissed him.
Notes: My entry for merlin_rarepair’s second challenge which was a five things challenge. The last one is inspired by the idea in some versions Guinevere ends up ( Read more... )

.fic, tv. in a land of myth &time of epic gay.

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atraphoenix July 8 2009, 22:15:12 UTC
This was brilliant. Morgana's personality shone through in all of them, with a nice balance between her strength and her vulnerability.

I think the one with Mordred was my favourite. Their relationship - or, rather, the roots we saw in the show - is definitely an intriguing one, and the imagery of age and power was very strong.

(And the whole rune porn thing seems to be cropping up on my f-list a lot at the moment. I'm sure that says something about the Merlin fans XD)

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oltha_heri July 8 2009, 23:00:33 UTC
I'm so glad she was in the whole piece.

The Mordred one was kind of unexpected, I didn't even really plan to write this, but that came in to my head and then it went to the keyboard, and I knew what I had to do. I was really pleased with it.

(It is merely indicative of our good tastes.)

And I forgot to say: thank you, 'cause I'm an ass. I'm glad you liked it.

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oltha_heri July 8 2009, 23:09:09 UTC
Well I'm glad it is painful, 'cause that kind of was the point, but I'm more glad that you still kept reading & loved it!

I hate writing evil!Morgana but for some reason I do.

Thank you. :D

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netgirl_y2k July 8 2009, 23:47:19 UTC
Oh. Dude. This is brilliant. I think the last one is my favourite, but really, they're all perfect.

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oltha_heri July 9 2009, 01:10:31 UTC
Thank you. :D

I'm happy the last one is working 'cause it I did leave the surrounding issues left so undefined.

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zempasuchil July 8 2009, 23:53:34 UTC
oh OUCH. This is good. This is really good. I love the surprises here - that you went far into the future, that you saved the Gwen kiss for last when I assumed it would be among the first, and you made it so much more powerful that way! Mordred too, omg! I really love your Morgana. And your Merlin - he's still funny :D And the symbols painted on their bodies - oh man. *fans self*

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oltha_heri July 9 2009, 01:16:24 UTC
Thank you!

I thought I was going to place the Gwen kiss early too. :) I'm flattered you found Merlin funny 'cause I just saw him hanging out on a wall thinking, well at least no one is throwing vegetables at me. And yeah, rune porn is *sigh* special.

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nyaza July 8 2009, 23:59:30 UTC
this is gorgeous, I love it. there so much pain, and I love how in nocent everything begins and how it twists till the point of no return. But there's still some innocence in the end. My favourite without a doubt would be the merlin one. so gorgeous, and so... idk, i just can imagine them :DD

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oltha_heri July 9 2009, 01:19:42 UTC
Thank you, and being able to imagine them is very good.

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