Comments | oltha_heri: Law & Order: UK Fic.

oltha_heri

Law & Order: UK Fic. - Enough.

Mar 26, 2009 19:18

Told you my muse wanted me to write these two.

Title: Enough.
Rating: G
Word Count: 491
Genre: Angst.
Characters & Pairings: James Steel, Alesha Phillips (friendship)
Summary: Just an angsty moment between our two favourite Crown Prosecutors.
Notes: I’m not sure if I have a handle on the characters yet, so any feedback on that (and anything ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

persiflage_1 March 27 2009, 06:33:35 UTC

Aw... Poor Alesha... Go on James, hug her!

oltha_heri March 27 2009, 20:20:25 UTC

OMG them hugging would be adorable! Oh new show why must you make me ship so hard?!

Thanks for commenting.

persiflage_1 March 27 2009, 20:29:25 UTC

Oh new show why must you make me ship so hard?!

I keep asking them the same thing - and they just give me a little, enigmatic smile... :D

oltha_heri March 27 2009, 20:39:45 UTC

I have to respond because OMG THEIR LITTLE SMILES! I think Freema Agyeman and Ben Daniels' little smiles have killed me. I just- oh, so much shippiness in me for these two.

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fourzoas March 27 2009, 12:21:56 UTC

I really like the way you're portraying them here, particularly the slow erosion of her idealism. Really nice moment.

bamberrific March 27 2009, 17:30:53 UTC

I agree. And to me it seems as though you have a very good grasp of the characters.

I especially loved this part:

She's staring at him though, and she doesn't want to be lied to, and he doesn't know if he could even she did. "No, no it's not." The words feel forced. He doesn't want to tell her this. He doesn't want to admit it to himself, but she nods and her posture straightens as she turns to face the city again.

Very well done.

oltha_heri March 27 2009, 20:24:24 UTC

Thank you so much. I am so glad it seemed in character. I'm also happy you liked that part because it was a last minute addition and I was worried about it.

oltha_heri March 27 2009, 20:21:37 UTC

Thank you, I liked playing around with developing character, so I'm glad you liked how it ended up. Also great icon, I'm kind of in love with her and her scarves.

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rochvelleth March 27 2009, 19:05:26 UTC

I enjoyed that. I love that kind of portrayal of their relationship. Thanks!

oltha_heri March 27 2009, 20:25:03 UTC

Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

tattooedsiren April 17 2009, 01:31:34 UTC

Nice fic. Can totally see this moment between them.