You Brought Me Here (The Best Day), Jongyu, PG

[olebade]

Title: You Brought Me Here (The Best Day)
Pairing: Onew/Jonghyun, siblings!Key/Minho/Taemin
Rating: PG
Summary: After years of hiding his memories in an old shoebox, Jinki has finally decided to share them with his boys.
AN: This was completely inspired by this site. I liked the idea originally, but I'm not quite sure how it turned out. Something

Comments

[ex_argh]

;__; this almost made me cry (but you know that already)! So sad~ at the start I imagined you know, Jjong had just left him. T_T; But no~ *weeps* anyway^^; ;_; this is really sweet (in a way) and angsty ;__;
♥
(next time I demand fluff~~~~ o__o)!
;D

[jinkibumiminho]

Thanks for sharing the tumblr site. It made me cry, as did this lovely story (hubby's leaving in the morning, out of town for a week).

Great work.

[olebade]

awwwwwwwww dont cry!

i just found that tumblr through an article i read on the front page of yahoo. lol but i liked it and now its one of my favorite sites to go to cause its so sweet :)

thanks for reading!

[hikaritsubasa]

i makes me cry!!! T____T
It was sad and sweet at the same time...
It was a good fic!

[olebade]

dont cry :(

im glad you liked it tho!

thanks for reading!

[fantasydesire]

TT__________________TT

this is very sad.. ><"

but its good..

[olebade]

i always seem to write sad things.......
but im glad you liked it!
thank you for reading! :)

[illusions_chan]

Aww.. this is absolutely beautiful. I always try to avoid end-of-life fics because I know I'll bawl, but I just had to read this. Their memories and the conversations are so lovely and natural. I love how the descriptions from their youth mix with their currents selves. I also love Jinki's constant background on their lives, especially Jonghyun. It's beautiful and utterly heartbreaking at the same time --> getting memmed.

P.S. I noticed no issues with the tense. First person is always hard to write, but I think you got it!

[olebade]

:) thank you so much. i tried hard to think of how they would respond to certain situations and i'm glad it turned out alright.

PS: after looking over it again, I noticed one or two XD