Dang. This one is pretty much non-stop violence as everyone beats the tar out of everyone else. Don't expect clever plot twists or social significance or anything like that. I wrote this when I was in the grip of all-out martial arts mania. Not only did I sit through every action movie from Hong Kong or Japan that was within reach, not only did I devour many books and magazines on the subject, but I studied the Fu Jow Pai style for a year. Not that I ever became a good fighter but I certainly got into amazing shape just from the training. The original manuscript goes into excruciating detail about every spinning crescent kick and outer forearm block, but I have cut that way down for this revision. There were a few pages showing Kim and Njimi fighting the Snake men behind the house and I dropped those as well, because it took away from the main event
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