RACK UP THE BALLS !! CHAPTER 5

May 02, 2008 00:00


AUTHOR :  oldbatj

SUMMARY:  After an evening playing pool Sam and Dean are kidnapped by a gang of thugs. Taken to a nearby park where they are raped and abused. Will the close bond they have as brothers survive or will it change their relationship forever?

Nc-17,  NON-CON RAPE, Torture, Violence, Bad Language, Knifeplay, Dean/omc, Sam/omc, Wincest

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violence, nc-17, knifeplay, torture, wincest, dean/omc, bad language, non-con rape, sam/omc

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suprnaturalfan May 2 2008, 04:34:47 UTC
wow i just saw this on spn_hardcore and read all five chapters tonight. i cant wait to see the fall out. also i just like to friend you so that i can get to read more of this but also some of your other stories as well

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oldbatj May 4 2008, 11:49:18 UTC
Well, SPNFan, I'm so pleased that you found me and that you are enjoying it so far...Those first five chapters were a bear to write.....I try to post a NEW chapter every Thursday or Friday night. Just finishing ch 9 ....might have a ch 10 then done.....THANK YOU AGAIN for not only being nice enough to read but review..
Gotta admit I am a REVIEW WHORE !!!! :0) 'J'

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2sexyboys May 2 2008, 04:39:36 UTC
OMG! They did it! I felt for sure they were just scaring them, but they did it! Not that I would do it myself, or think that this is the way to get reve...fuck it.....they got what they had coming to them.

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oldbatj May 4 2008, 11:56:14 UTC
I'm so glad that you agree with the boys.....Guess they just wanted to make sure something like that never happens again...and yes...definitely what they had deserved. Thank you for continuing to follow the boys and I through this one....and reviewing.....HUGS, 'J'

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huntress69 May 2 2008, 04:48:43 UTC
Oh wow, you did an amazing job with this. I'm glad the guys did what they did, anything else would have disappointed me. Rapists deserve this in spades and I thank you for writing it. Looking forward to more, because I expect you have another part planned. I give ****. (That's supposed to be four stars LOL)....

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oldbatj May 4 2008, 12:01:38 UTC
Thank you, what a nice compliment!!....I have to say it was kinda mean and angsty on my part, both in the delivery and in my feelings, but it seemed like the right revenge....Having been there...yeah, rapists are not nice, fun peeps...AND thank you, my dear, for the stars......HAVE to say I am mesmerized by your 'flashing' Deans....just want to stare at that all day.... :0) 'J'

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huntress69 May 4 2008, 19:20:31 UTC
I've been there myself and know other women who have suffered as well. To see a rapist get their just rewards feels good to me in a sick way, because in RL, it doesn't happen. I never did anything about it, because I was young and the laws were also different then. There was no such thing known as "date-rape". Today, yeah, I would have gone to court, but years ago, no. And glad you like the icon. I make the flashing ones but they are simple, cause I don't have very much talent LOL...but pics can be nice too....

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credulesque May 2 2008, 13:56:04 UTC
Oh my god this was graphic!
But you totally conveyed their feelings and how it had affected Dean and Sam and how far they were willing to go.
I like that Sam offered to do it for Dean.
Great work!
=D

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oldbatj May 4 2008, 12:04:17 UTC
I think we all agree that even quiet Sam would have torn them apart bare-handed if necessary..Glad you agreed with the very graphic punishment they meted out...Promise only sweetness and angst after this...... 'J'

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feather_touch May 2 2008, 15:27:29 UTC
I have to agree with the sentiment rapists deserve this sort of punishment.

Great update.

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oldbatj May 4 2008, 12:07:54 UTC
So nice to see you visiting again, my sweet friend. Yes, I do believe these guys were proof that you reap what you sow!! Thank you for another kind review..... Will think of you as Zman and I have coffee this a.m. :0) 'J'

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