The 'Everything But...' Comment Fest ♥

Jan 29, 2011 19:54

Okay, let's give this a go... (er, changed my mind about the Valentine Comment Fest... maybe in a couple of weeks? :P)

The Harry Potter 'Everything But...' Comment Fest' ♥


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FILL domani_kiyozuki January 30 2011, 10:29:34 UTC
O.o I don't even know! I blame late nights and coffee
Absolution

Lucius smirked. The boy's resistance was quite endearing. His arse had to be burning from the bare handed spanking he'd received earlier, but not a sound escaped from behind the gag shoved between those sneering lips. It was for the best - it stopped the babbling denials, when Weasley's body so clearly betrayed his silver-tongued barbs.

Lucius nudged his knees further apart, settling nicely between the wide V they made. Weasley was quivering - Lucius pinched the inside of one pre-come slicked thigh, grinning when his companion moaned loudly.

Finally, a reaction.

"Hush," he commanded, laughing cruelly when he saw the fear and lust sparkling in those dark, dialated eyes. A feeling of power surged through his veins, his blood boiling in anticipation of what was to come. Literally.

Lucius stroked the underside of Weasley's cock, which swelled instantly under the attention. Weasley squirmed, pulling away only to push back against Lucius's fingers. Lucius observed the many expressions flitting across his face, watching the internal struggle with mild interest. Any second now...

First came horror, then shocked disbelief, as though he couldn't possibly be doing this. As though he hadn't Floo-called Lucius after another hard day at the Ministry, as he did every Thursday evening, wanting it rough enough to forget he had a respectable job and responsibilities and a doting fiancee waiting for him at home.

Next came realization, then acceptance, when he remembered how frustrating working as an Under Secretary to the Minister was, why he needed the release denied to him in every other aspect of his life.

Lucius pushed Weasley back against the duvet, checking the silver green ties binding his hands to the head-board as the last change, defeat, made Weasley shut his eyes and turn his head away. His cheeks and chest flushed cherry red in embarrassment, and saltwater tears pricked the corners of his eyes.

Lucius wiped them away patiently, the pads of his thumbs brushing his strong jaw and bobbing Adam's apple before smearing the tears onto the head of Weasley's erection.

Weasley gasped when Lucius's grip on his shaft tightened. "Do you want me to let you come?" he asked, squeezing again for emphasis. The answering sob was enough, but Lucius dissolved the gag for the final humiliation.

It took a few tries, lip licking and important-sounding throat clearing, but finally he managed a strangled "P-please!" before ducking his head in capitulation.

Only a few tugs did it until Weasley came with a shout, ribbons of come spurting across the silk bedding and on the bulge over Lucius's trousers. He cleaned the mess with a careless wave as Weasley sank back against the pillows, recovering from the high.

Lucius bemoaned the loss of vulnerability in the red-headed wizard, who slid off the bed after summoning those ugly horn-rimmed specs of his. Weasley's impassive mask slipped back into place as he tugged on his robes, staring down at the man who owned him.

"Same time next week?" Lucius drawled, daring him to disagree.

Weasley scoffed, though the tips of his ears turned red, "Of course," he said calmly, "Until then, don't forget to come." he sneered, nodding to his straining erection.

He spun on his heel and Disaparated without another word.

Lucius grinned as he indulged in a slow wank. Next week couldn't come soon enough.

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Re: FILL valinorean January 31 2011, 05:15:38 UTC
Mmmm, love the powerplay here.

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Re: FILL domani_kiyozuki February 2 2011, 06:55:43 UTC
Aww, thank you! It's a first for me, this rare-pair...

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Re: FILL lordhellebore January 31 2011, 19:33:49 UTC
I can definitely see this Percy. Even he needs some time away from being a stuffy Ministry official, and Lucius is the perfect escape.

Thank you :)

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Re: FILL domani_kiyozuki February 4 2011, 00:24:31 UTC
Absolutely! A pleasure to write, and I'm glad you enjoy it ;D

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Re: FILL geneva2010 February 2 2011, 06:31:54 UTC
Eeeek! This comment fest is just one hot, hot fic after another. Yours is absolutely SCORCHING! Both Percy and Lucius were perfectly in character, and the little power twist at the end was superb. Smearing his tears on his cock! Coming over still-clothed Lucius! OMG . . . Great job!

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Re: FILL domani_kiyozuki February 4 2011, 00:28:02 UTC
Eeeek! This comment fest is just one hot, hot fic after another. Yours is absolutely SCORCHING! Both Percy and Lucius were perfectly in character, and the little power twist at the end was superb. Smearing his tears on his cock! Coming over still-clothed Lucius! OMG . . . Great job!

Thanks! I was very nervous about posting - would anyone understand, would they be squicked by the tears, did I put both wizards in character?! And to hear its scorching, with all the other brilliant drabbles here is... *astounded* ♥

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