(Challenge 17 - declarative sentences, take two)

Jun 13, 2016 00:53

These lines are about main character from Rosiant. If you want to read it, please be warned of spoilers.
  1. Sain Effor's birth name is known to few.
  2. 'Effor' was the given name of his maternal grandfather, suggested as an alias by a teacher at the age of 15.
  3. He was born a rich man's second son. His father gave him off to the military at the age of 7 so ( Read more... )

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12_drakon June 16 2016, 23:59:40 UTC
I really like this character - and the sentences left me feeling... curious. I feel like you know so much more about each one than you are telling :-) I want to, dunno, catch him and interrogate him more? About whys and how-tos and how-comes. Like, what are some cool values he found in individuals? Where's the music-aversion coming from? How come he dislikes milk?

Love the guy :-)

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okkkkay June 17 2016, 21:36:46 UTC
No time for interrogation, but you can observe him in his natural habitat ( ... )

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12_drakon June 20 2016, 11:27:57 UTC
I will view each sentence as a prompt for when you expand them in the story :-) As long as you get to what they are about, my curiosity can wait. Tease! < 333

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okkkkay June 23 2016, 13:29:10 UTC
Your curiosity is held back by your patience. Next month, you will be reading Mtmte so.... I'd better hurry up and write until that?

You know some already. The origin of his name, family relations, and why you shouldn't brinng food to your quarters at Celua.

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12_drakon June 23 2016, 13:34:59 UTC
Oh, I felt like pain the other day and caught up on MTMTE... Sigh.

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