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[okamichan]

 I should be heading to bed, or even working on Star Crossed, but I needed a break from the uber angst. May finish another chapter of this before I go back to it. Since the next chapter might actually be fluffier than this one. O_o I hope, if it all works out.

Big battle scene chapter, at least that's what I was going for. If you notice anything

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[okamichan]

I'll be even happier if I can get the next one out relatively quickly.

[okamichan]

erk! Thanks!

It should be 'we wouldn't be having this conversation', think it used to be 'this wouldn't even be an issue. Heh, teach me to edit at midnight! XD

I'm looking forward to reading it whenever you can finish it. :D

[__wilderness__]

The first instance of Jet Judo?

*grins* Another excellent chapter! And I'm loving Ratchet in this one!

[okamichan]

Sunny pulled it earlier, though Jazz wasn't there for that.

'He paused on Sunstreaker’s account, wondering what possessed the mech to climb a building and jump on a Seeker. What the frag tactic was that?'

:D

Thank you! I do have fun writing everyone's favorite cranky medic.

[prowlstar]

Woot for jet judo! And double woot for the new chapter! Ratchet's going to fry a circuit board when he find's out what Sideswipe pulled.

Ratchet: I thought I said minimum walking!

Sides: I wasn't technically walking, seeing as I wasn't on the ground

Ratchet: *glare*

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

[okamichan]

Ratchet sure will. XD Ratch isn't going to be the only one, either. *snickers*

Sides was trying to tell Jazz just that before the transmission was jammed too. LOL!