-nothing intelligent to stick up here-

[okamichan]

My bunny closet busted open about a month ago. While the ones in there, are still in there, the closet's not accepting anymore bunnies. So I started this thing (about a month ago? I'm sure the date on the file's not accurate), and it's turning out longer than I expected it to. Hopefully, I'll have the chance to finish it before the week's out (not

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[__wilderness__]

*whimpers* Blue...

[okamichan]

Yes, yes indeed. Admittedly, though, this is too easy to do to him. :/

[wyntir_rose]

Wow ... I mean, seriously, all I can think of is wow. That was great. In a heart-wrenching kind of way. I can't wait to read the next installment. ... Poor Blue :(

Your characterizations were dead on. I especially loved Prowl's idea of comfort, and your scary/dangerous image of Sunstreaker.

[okamichan]

Bluestreak's one of those characters that just attaches himself to your heart-string, and with his past, it's very easy to pull them.

Even though I'm still tweaking his character, this is still Privileges of Rank Prowl, and he has yet to learn that numbers don't comfort everyone. ^^;;

As for Sunny, I'm still tweaking his character, too. I want him to frighten the Decepticons for one reason, and the Autobots for another. :/ Of course terrorizing the Decepticons leads to scaring his comrades, too.

Thank you. ^^

[cmdrtekk]

Detail. Amazeing detail.