TMNT Fic

[okamichan]

Taking a break from angsting, giant robots to write a little turtle-y humor. (These breaks seem to have become more and more frequent as I draw near the end. o_O)

Title He's a Little Turtle
Characters Michelangelo, Raphael, Splinter
Warnings Mikey's a bit of a jerk, Raphael uses dirty words
Summary Michelangelo was clearly suicidal. Full of

Comments

[dvana]

Ha! The mental image there is priceless. Loved this.

[okamichan]

Heehee, that's what made me wanna write it in the first place. (Also Raph's first line, and the flippin' ditty). Glad to hear it came through. :D

[soliloquy]

I loved the way you described things, I also could see it clearly in my mind.
Your characterization of all of them is fabulous and spot-on! :-)

[okamichan]

Thank you! I love writing little humor pieces like this, and I'm glad to hear the narrative didn't get jumbled up. I can so see something like this happening. Especially between Mike and Raph. XD

[ninjamisha]

Oh dear, it's going to be difficult to listen to the teapot song without going into a giggle fit. :)
Excellent job on this! It was extremly enjoyable to read ^^
You're a fantastic writer!

[okamichan]

*giggle* I had it stuck in my head all that day too. Glad to share the... torture?

I'm glad you liked it. THank you!