OhSam Triple Play 2015!

Nov 02, 2015 12:06

The comm hosted this little event a couple of years ago, and as November 2 is an auspicious day for our darling Sam, today would be the perfect time to revisit this challenge. Welcome to the Triple Play 2015!


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FILLED: Maleficus crowroad3 November 10 2015, 07:36:23 UTC
Maybe you thought it would cure, herd of leech and blade; all the parasites.

You’ve always faithed yourself dry, boy; to a powder, to dust.

*

The trees are ash, the insects locust; the voice of the cunning-man lisps geomancy, nine directions for the body's blood.

No use anymore for humours, but here you are, another deal; a day mausoleum’d in the book, diviner-herbalists, plant-animal-mineral, blood; find yourself a dreamer, a sleep-flyer, bone-thrower who knows the roots of the blood-words and even the ur-stain might be--

“You come to be cleansed, boy?”

Yes, you say, and kneel in the pasture, hand over the broke-necked sacrifice; put your head, hairs a spill, into your marrow-bruised elbows.

If in the Biblical sense you’re lost, go back before; go back before.

Didn’t take as long as you’d think--

to find a cunning-man in Kansas.

*

The blade’s a sickle; the moon’s down. Cunning-man has eyes like flytraps.Two-Sisters and Two-Brothers, horned assists, stand by in the cowfield, heifers long gone, bantam-spirits in the coop; help him cut.

“Plethora-blood of two kinds, boy, yours and the other.”

Get it out, what holy fire can’t. For good.

Your ligaments leap, drink their own weight. There’s a nightjar. There’s the edge. The suspension of plasmancy. There’s earth, manure-viscera; this is the place.

“This,” says the cunning-man, “’ll keep the whispers out.”

The power from your shame-taped mesentery; what do they know.

Go deeper. More, you might say.

God’s a predator, you scream, maybe, to the missing moon.

Two-Sisters and Two-Brothers, respectful, bend to the rivulets, cup your pulses, hand the cunning-man the skin-bags, blow the century-dust high, eyeward.

Cunning-man dusts the cuts, hums phonemes you can’t catch.

Something rushes out. You flatten, go down.

Screech-owl sounds in the glade; snap of a shrew-spine. You lose time.

You lose time.

Wake to faces, six irides, horns, manus settled in your deepest scores.

“Go,” says the cunning-man, to your grassy back.

You stumble, a hemorrhage, to the verge.

*

Your brother's been searching since midnight. Finds you at dawn in the drive, half-slid from the driver’s of the runt of the bunker-fleet, with a raised brow and a where have--

“Sam, where've you been?” Your sleeves brush the cuts; you breathe a kind of--

Fresh fire. To the edge of the hanging road, to the edge of the Empty, where we’ve been, where we’re going.

“Dean.” You might list left.

Your brother’s arms catch; cloud claws horizon, crosses the hatch of home.

“Sam.”

Maybe you thought you’d rise, dry-

you'd walk together into the new day.

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RE: FILLED: Maleficus indiachick November 10 2015, 09:25:31 UTC
This is beautiful. As is your other fic - I really, really love how you use language in a sparse, sharp way, pared to perfection, able to really evoke the senses even without the traditional structures of narrative to back it up. It's kind of amazing.

In this one, especially, the conjuring of a vague half-glimpsed ritual, the birds, desperation and shame, "cutting-man has eyes like flytraps", the alliteration of Screech-owl sounds in the glade; snap of a shrew-spine. Love it! Thank you so much :)

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RE: FILLED: Maleficus crowroad3 November 11 2015, 07:31:03 UTC
Aw, thank you! Am really glad you like, because that is a fantastically evocative prompt that deserves far more than my habitual economy can do! ( :

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RE: FILLED: Maleficus madebyme_x November 10 2015, 14:21:37 UTC
A beautiful and eerie take on the prompt. I loved how stumbled away at the end and then we see Dean's fear at him being missing.

Thank you for sharing :)

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RE: FILLED: Maleficus crowroad3 November 11 2015, 06:38:18 UTC
So glad you enjoyed! I wanted to do more with Dean's fear, but he wouldn't speak up, heh.

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