Blink

[twilightshours]

 

Comments

[wintersjuly]

oh jesus christ this is terrifying. and brilliant. but mostly crazypants scary

i love the way that neither we or sam know what's real or not, but that we know just a little more than sam, just enough to be able to figure out what's actually going on. there's no resolution really, and wow, that just makes it all that much scarier.

[twilightshours]

Thank you... for freaking out? :) I have a penchant for scary stuff, haha.

I am guilty of demanding resolution in what I read, so I felt a bit hypocritical for not writing an actual conclusion, but I'm glad you think it works!

[greeneyes_fan]

Creepy. Really creepy, and the disorientation just adds to it.

[twilightshours]

Thanks! :)

[mimblexwimble]

"A couple days. Cas has knocked you out for a while."

Oh. Shit.

This was creepy as hell. And so very well-done!

[twilightshours]

Haha, oh shit indeed.
Thank you so much! I'm very grateful that it was taken well into the community.

[fourtenpm]

Sheeth, I haven't read anything as creepy as this one for... ever.

[twilightshours]

Well, thank you! Creepy is what I aim for.

[phorenice]

Bad writing? You're a liar!

I love the repetitive narration. It adds to the creepiness and trapped feeling of Sam's condition. You leave us hanging, not knowing what's real - it could all be in Sam's head during detox, it could be something else - a never-ending nightmare.
And now ... I'm tired.

[twilightshours]

Awww, I'm glad you disagree!
Thank you, too; I feared repetition would mess up reading comprehension, but I'm very happy it works for you.
Hehe. :)