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comment fic meme!

Aug 02, 2011 01:56

Following the results of the poll we took last month (don't make it easy on us or anything, guys, haha!), we've decided to hold a comment fic meme once every three months. This gives everyone time to write and prompt to their heart's content, and allows us mods to keep up with y'all. And we're starting right now!

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And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 5 2011, 16:44:58 UTC

He remembers that night in the library, a million years ago. Sam rubbing his eyes and yawning over his foamy, sugar-enriched coffee, head bobbing and hair falling in his face. The memory is so sudden, so vivid, it’s as if he could reach out and touch it.

So close, but gone. Obliterated. Ruined.

Absolutely ruined.

“I’m sorry,” Jack whispers, and doesn’t know why. Sam stops busily sawing at the tie and turns his head. His hair falls away and he’s a boy. He’s a man. He’s a killer.

“It’s okay,” Sam says, “It doesn’t matter, now.”

Jack wants to tell him, I’m sorry I ever knew you. Because it’s the truth.

But the words won’t come.

Sam gives him a little smile.

He’s got Jack’s hand free and has started on their bound wrists when there’s a bang! outside and the whole house shakes, again, and Dean makes a noise like someone’s tearing his skin off. Some awful wordless cry. Sam’s on his feet before Jack even registers it, shouting, “Dean! Dean!”

Jack blurts, “Wait!” and he doesn’t know why. It doesn’t matter, though.

Sam’s gone.

Beside him, Leslie picks up the knife. She turns it over in her hand. It’s about four inches, sturdy, and worn. Well-used, and well cared for. Sam’s knife.

Coffee and studying and tomato soup and notes from the TA and death and blood and horror and well-cared-for knives.

“We need to get out of here,” he tells her, “Before Sam comes back.”

They’re a long way away before they finally stop running.

-end-

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Title is taken from “Radioactive” by Kings of Leon. :3

I love me some badass!Winchesters, so, yeah. With the exploding heads and all. DON’T JUDGE ME OKAY.

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 vail_kagami August 5 2011, 17:10:34 UTC

Argh! So heartbreaking! And yet so painfully possible.
A very brave fill.

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 5 2011, 19:53:38 UTC

They *need* to do something like this on the show. Because even if Sam's not a psycho killer, he's still not the kid he was back in the old days...heh.

Thanks so much!

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 quickreaver August 5 2011, 17:58:22 UTC

Outsider POV, badass!Winchesters being equisitely badass, LOVE!

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 quickreaver August 5 2011, 17:59:17 UTC

(I can spell, I swear. Exquisitely.)

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 5 2011, 19:55:22 UTC

Hee! I thought maybe it was 'requisitely,' which also works. ;)

And yes! Moar badass!Winchesters! Killing things and kicking ass and being unapologetic about it! I approve this message!

So glad you enjoyed! ;)

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 greeneyes_fan August 5 2011, 19:04:54 UTC

Oh, wow.

And the worst part is, maybe for them, being terrified of Sam is better than understand the truth.

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 5 2011, 19:57:09 UTC

In pretty much every possible way, yah...("Oh, hi guys, how are you? Managing a Fortune 500? That's great! Me? Oh, y'know, I'm the one true vessel of Satan. Hey, are those cheese cubes?" <--Or, why Sam can never go to a class reunion.)

Thanks very much!

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 super_pan August 6 2011, 15:33:30 UTC

Ha ha, I want that fic too! This was a great, and very sad fic. Totally how it would be these days.

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 6 2011, 16:45:42 UTC

It'd be a shame if the writers missed the opportunity to do something like this in the upcoming season. Just, some sort of stocktaking, y'know?

And yeah, I love the idea of cheerfully oblivious Sam wandering around his former classmates, horrifying them and eating cheese cubes. :B

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed. <3

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 mamapranayama August 5 2011, 19:52:19 UTC

Wow! I loved the vivid imagery in this. Great work! :)

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 5 2011, 19:58:19 UTC

Aww, thanks so much! I had to stop myself from describing the individual strands of Sam's hair...no, really. Heh.

Glad you liked it!

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 roque_clasique August 5 2011, 21:15:21 UTC

ACK AMAZING, so sad and hard and good.

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 6 2011, 16:46:34 UTC

I made no effort at all to incorporate comfort in this one. NONE. Hah!

Glad you liked it! ♥

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 dollarformyname August 5 2011, 21:19:11 UTC

His hair falls away and he’s a boy. He’s a man. He’s a killer. Holy crap, how do you do these things? You are stunningly terrifying and I love it.

I WILL ONLY JUDGE YOU IF YOU EVER STOP WRITING BADASS!WINCHESTERS, JSYK.

Re: And They Cry to See Your Face; PG13 (Gore, violence) 5/5 honeylocusttree August 6 2011, 16:48:39 UTC

Glad to be of service! And yah, Sam really is all those things. Even with his soul and all his memories intact. Beware!

Winchesters who are not BAMFs are no Winchesters of mine. Trufax.

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