comment fic meme!

[mimblexwimble]

Following the results of the poll we took last month (don't make it easy on us or anything, guys, haha!), we've decided to hold a comment fic meme once every three months. This gives everyone time to write and prompt to their heart's content, and allows us mods to keep up with y'all. And we're starting right now!

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Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

“Son of a bitch,” Dean mutters, shoving himself up off the bed and stalking to the bathroom. Grudgingly, he wets a washcloth with cold water and stomps his way back to Sam.

“C'm'ere,” he says, crouching down and tilting Sam's head up. Efficiently, he wipes away the sweat and tears and snot while Sam stares at him like he's not sure he believes what he's seeing.

“Y'want some water?”

Sam hesitates, then nods and Dean heads to the bathroom again to fill up a cup, then brings it back and helps Sam drink when his epileptic hands threaten to drench them both.

“Handcuffs stay on,” Dean says gruffly.

Sam looks at him, all wide-eyed and damn reminiscent of that innocent floppy-haired kid he used to be and how the hell did they end up here?

“I'm gonna kick your ass all the way to next year for this when you're better,” Dean warns, in case Sam thinks he's gotten away with this ('cause, you know, the kid's a god damned idiot so Dean wouldn't put it past him).

“'M sorry,” Sam says, and Dean thinks, damn straight, you better be fucking sorry, but he just sits himself down next to his moron of a little brother and pulls the shivering dumbass into his lap so he can put his arm around him.

“Shut up, Sam.”

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[saberivojo]

Owe and yes. I love that Dean is being the strong big bro because he needs to be right now. Dean's right too, he needs to get Sam straight before old JDub gets home.

Really nice job.

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

Thanks!

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[verucasalt123]

Oh, thank you so so so much for this!!! It's wonderful and I think you captured Dean's feelings and voice so well.

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

No problem! Your prompt just jumped at me and kind of wrote itself. :)

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[ephemerall]

You really did an excellent job with this -- have you given any thought to what started the addiction? Or what caused Sam to turn to drugs? I'd love to see backstory to it :)

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

Y'know, as I was writing I was thinking to myself, 'Eventually Dean's gonna say, what the hell were you thinking? Explain yourself!' But... he didn't and I was greatly relieved 'cause I got nothing =P

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[ephemerall]

I know how you feel with that one haha

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[quickreaver]

Succinct, potent, great job! :D

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

Thank you!

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[beatlemaniac9]

Awww, poor Sam!

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

Nothing I love more than hurting that boy =P

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[zara_zee]

Great Dean voice. And exactly how I can see him handling/reacting to something like this!

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

Cheers!

Re: FILLED - Taming the Dragon 2/2

[mentholpixie]

Thank you!
I've been reading Kroki Refur's stuff lately and she has an awesome Dean voice - I think it's been rubbing off. I used to worry that I didn't write Dean well so thanks for the encouragement. :)