One Breath

[vail_kagami]

Title:  One Breath
Author: vail_kagami
Genre: gen
Characters: Sam, Dean, a reaper
Rating: G
Word count: 2122
Warnings: death, outside pov
Spoilers: Doesn't coincide with canon but spoilers up to 6.11 to be safe.
Summary: Three people are standing by as Sam dies. One of them is himself.
Note: Witten for this prompt bythelocation at the h/c prompt challenge.

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

Oh!

My first fic of the New Year and it has dissolved me into a puddle of tears!

I repeat, oh! Just too good...and sad.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! And sorry about the tears...

[shadowsunrising]

Oh. Dear. Lord. I don't think anyone would be able to see or hear past their tears if this had happened in canon. Then again, I can barely see the keyboard now so it's pretty much the same thing, just pure...

There is no possible way for me to be coherent about how heartbreaking this is, will a metaphorical bucket of tears and awe do instead?

[vail_kagami]

Does it sound weird if I say I'm glad you found this heartbreaking? Because the prompt was so sad and I had feared that my fill kind of sucked.

So, thank you for the feedback!

[deanish_ness]

That is really very beautiful. Good job!

[vail_kagami]

Thank you!

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! I'm really glad you think this is good.

[dontknowmyname]

This was so great. You're writing is amazing and the story was heartbreaking but perfect. I love the scene and the love between them. I really hope we see more of this type of stuff when Supernatural come back, except I'd rather Sam not die in the show lol. Great story! Thank you so much for writing it.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you very much for your comment!
I'd like to see something like that on the show as well.