fic: Louder than sirens, louder than bells, sweeter than heaven, and hotter than hell

[ohmydarlingdear]

Title: Louder than sirens, louder than bells, sweeter than heaven, and hotter than hell
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Rating: PG-13 (because I probably threw around the f-bomb a little too much for it to be considered PG)
Word Count: approx. 3,000
Summary: In which Arthur is considered completely unapproachable and Eames decides to accept the challenge.
A/N:

Comments

[iri_descent]

BUT YOU ARE LOVELY, ARTHUR, YOU REALLY ARE. This was glorious. What a wonderful fill, truly. It made me a little sad at first because what you've portrayed is so true to the sometimes-cruelty of real life high-school - the exclusivity of it, how rumours and hearsay can define people's perception of someone, Arthur's loneliness.

But then, I suppose it made it all the more heartwarming that Eames took a chance and reached out (oh, your Eames is brilliant - so not smooth and yet charming, nervous and yet forward enough to ask Arthur out on a date in their first interaction). And I loved how unexpected your Arthur was - soft spoken, playful, intelligent, endearingly unsure why Eames was so intrigued by him etc etc. /rambling

ESSENTIALLY I ADORED THIS WITH ALL OF MY HEART.

omg. why is this comment so ridiculously useless and long and capslock-y? I AM SORRY.

Just gotta add: this line (A light pink appears in bursts at Arthur’s cheekbones, and his eyes curve into crescent shapes when he smiles) made me MELT. Because jgl does smile like that! Like a cartoon character, heee! Here's a pic for you? (you've probably seen it but omg, he's so adorable)



Ps. Just going to shamelessly jump on the bandwagon for a sequel. Only if you are thinking of it, that is. But yes, I too would absolutely love to read more of these two :)

Thank you for writing and sharing something so fantastic.

[iri_descent]

Shit. I hadn't realised how long this was. I really am sorry :/

[ohmydarlingdear]

no no no don't be sorry! I love long comments. they make me so happy :D
and thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this enough to abuse capslock heehee AND ALSO THAT PICTURE OF JGL IS BEAUTIFUL OK he really does look like a cartoon character sometimes d'awhhh -pinches cheeks-
(and yes, sequel is looking very likely and it's going to be cheesy and wonderful and all the glorious that comes with first dates)

[iri_descent]

Dude, I am so excited for it, can't even explain how much \o/

Um (awkward, awkward) would you mind if I friended you? To keep track of your fics etc? Because I am liable to forget to check back for your sequel and that would be a travesty?

*runs away awkwardly*

[ohmydarlingdear]

teehee of course I wouldn't mind. go ahead :D