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ohinyan

Fragments of a Shattered Life 22

Apr 07, 2010 10:00

Title: Fragments of a Shattered Life
Part: 22/28-ish
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Explicit violence, non-con
Genre: Angst
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, Tosh, Owen
Summary: After POTW Jack's life takes a turn for the worse and he desperately needs help. A Doctor Who/Torchwood crossover. Note that this is a very dark fic ( Read more... )

fragments, torchwood, doctor who, jack harkness

Comments 14

secretkeeper11 April 7 2010, 10:54:07 UTC

See, Jack- they care. Ianto still loves you, even if you can't die.

viomisehunt April 7 2010, 17:10:41 UTC

When the person I loved found out about this, he abandoned me on an uninhabitable space station and left me to die over and over. He called me a freak and an abomination.”

My poor baby; I still haven't forgiven Ten, not just for saying Jack was wrong, but not acknowledging at any point that this undying existence was like a curse that Jack did abosolutely nothing to deserve. And the Doctor's "it's okay, I don't mind" made me want to slap him. It's Jack who should have the option of deciding if HE wanted to stay with someone who treated him like a freak...but anyway, I love your Ianto. He is Ianto as we love him. Tosh to. Welcome back.

ohinyan April 12 2010, 10:11:35 UTC

I never could forgive Ten for not going back for Jack and for how he treated him later. I doubt I'll ever write a post POTW story that puts the Doctor in a good light.

teleens_journal April 7 2010, 18:00:53 UTC

Awwww. Lovely.

Thanks for writing!

teleens_journal April 8 2010, 02:28:12 UTC

PS. “Don't move she ordered him.”

I think you meant, "Don't move!" she ordered him.

:)

ohinyan April 8 2010, 07:12:15 UTC

Thanks

teleens_journal April 8 2010, 07:15:54 UTC

gemini72au April 8 2010, 09:57:40 UTC

Loved this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how Jack's confidence will evolve now that Ianto and the gang know about him, and have proven that they still care about him.