Fragments of a Shattered Life 13

[ohinyan]

Title: Fragments of a Shattered Life
Part: 13/28-ish
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Explicit violence, non-con
Genre: Angst
Characters: Jack Harkness, Tenth Doctor, Martha Jones, Rose Tyler
Summary: The Doctor and Rose run into Jack after POTW but all is not as it seems. Note that this is a very dark fic.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N:

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Comments

[gemini72au]

I'm still really enjoying this... although the wait for new chapters is slowly driving me insane! :-) Looking forward to more.

[ohinyan]

Well I'm very glad you are following it. Sorry about the wait between chapters, though I'm flattered that it's driving you insane. I'll try to keep to posting every 4 or 5 days rather than once a week.

[secretkeeper11]

I hope that this time the Doctor manages to surprise Jack.

[ohinyan]

Martha will certainly have something to say about it if the Doctor doesn't redeem himself.

[teleens_journal]

When I found this, it already had 12 chapters, but the wait for this one had me checking your journal every day.

I've always HATED the way that 10 treated Jack on the show & I think that Jack forgave him way, way too easily. I love how you're writing this & can't wait for the inevitable confrontation when 10 realizes what a prig he's been.

Thanks for writing!

[ohinyan]

Thank you, that makes me really happy. As it's my first story I was nervous that nobody would want to read it but
I've been really pleased by the response.

I agree entirely about the way the Doctor treated Jack. I could just about forgive the 9th Doctor for leaving as he was dying but I watched the Sycorax episode just waiting for the 10th Doctor to go back for him. I couldn't believe it when he didn't. And when they had the xmas party and acted as if they hadn't just lost a valued friend (and it was only days after in their timeline) it was the final straw. I never liked the 10th Doctor after that (I know it's all the writer's fault). Add Utopia to that and my opinion went even lower.

My Jack will not be nearly so forgiving. They will have a confrontation eventually.

Chapter 13

[viomisehunt]

Love the Jack/Martha bonding. Has the Doctor noticed that Martha is gone yet?

Re: Chapter 13

[ohinyan]

I think the Doctor will be along very soon to find Martha.

[jsks]

you are breaking my heart.

[ohinyan]

I suppose I shouldn't say good. But I am pleased to break someone's heart.