A New Dawn 41 (Epilogue)

[ohinyan]

Part:  41/41
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Mentions of previous torture and rape
Genre: Angst, AU
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, Owen, Tosh, Gwen
Summary: AU. The Torchwood team discover the truth about what happened on the Valiant and search for Jack. A dark fic.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
AN: And finally, we reach the end.

Previous chapter here:

Comments

[domiantorules]

Thank you for finishing this, it is PERFECT! I love every word of it. Any chance i could get a pdf of the whole trilogy i could keep and re-read? Definitely one of my all time favorites. And i didnt like Jack as the Face of Boe either. Since he always heals back as he was, even regrowing missing pieces, how coulld he ever become that alien being? And he was a con man, it makes more sense that he was playing the Doctor, seeing how much he could get him to swallow. THAT sounds like Jack. I even like you using the Doctor's own words at the end there. I hope you write more Torchwood stories some day, but I will understand if you are 'Torchwooded out' after all this. Fantastic, Epic story, you are one of the greats.

[ohinyan]

Thank you.

I have the trilogy in a few files so I would just need to join them together and remove my notes to myself that are in there. It shouldn't be too hard. There may be the odd word that got changed after I posted a chapter though, but not much. I'm away in Iceland on holiday next week so I'll do that when I get back.

Is there a way of posting a pdf file on live journal so readers can get it?

Glad you liked Jack quoting the Doctor.

I will probably let Jack off the hook for being traumatised for a while. I have been pretty horrible to him. I was thinking of a 5th Doctor Turlough story next. An angsty one of course.

[ohinyan]

I have a pdf file for each of the trilogy now. I don't know how to post them on livejournal so if you message me your email address I can send them to you.

[veritas6_5]

Just wonderful! You never fail us, and oh, I also hope you will write more Torchwood. If you need help providing a pdf of the whole trilogy, I can help with that. I am still working on finishing "The Man in Grey" for evalentine, but will finish that soon.

[ohinyan]

Thanks. And I am so pleased to have kept my promise not to abandon it. I will work on my 5th Doctor Turlough story next, the one I told you about, but may come back to Torchwood after that.

It shouldn't be too hard for me to make a pdf file from my raw files, but I could do with help on how to post it on here so people can download it.

[jo02]

I've just finished reading the last 4 chapters all together and enjoyed them very much.

I really enjoy your writing style.

In this last chapter I actually got goose-bumps reading this final encounter between Jack and the Doctor - kudos to your writing!

The only thing that makes me sad is that there are so few people left in TW fandom now to enjoy this story finished.
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[ohinyan]

Thank you. I'm glad you are still here to read it. It is entirely my own fault that the readers have drifted away. I will know better than to start posting a story again before I have most of it done. It'll be a shorter story next time too.

[domiantorules]

Oh, dont do that! I love long stories you can really get into. I've never seen the appeal of a drabble. Its like eating one potato chip. Who does that? Your trilogy was a banquet, a holiday feast. I search for long stories and rarely find them. And very few have your talent to write them well. And most of those aren't writing Torchwood any more, some left in mid story. I need my long Torchwood stories. Its what i read fanfiction for. I couldn't stand not having any more Torchwood, so when RTD wimped out on us, i turned to fanfiction to satisfy my Torchwood cravings. With the exception of the book written by John and Carole Barrowman, the fanfiction stories have turned out to be way better than the professional Torchwood stories in books. I NEED you guys. Or i just might go nuts.

[ceilidhg]

I just wanted to say congratulations on finishing this! For the longest time this series was like the "one that got away" for me. I devoured the first two parts all in one go not even realizing that it was a trilogy and was unfinished at the time. Seeing how it would end is actually the thing that tipped me over from fanfiction lurker to registered reader as I set up my account just to be sure I would get update notifications. That last chapter was the perfect ending to a truly captivating tale. Thank you for writing it and sharing it :)

[ohinyan]

Thank you. I am glad you found the ending. I fear that I was so slow that many readers will never see it.