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ohinyan

A New Dawn 4

Jun 21, 2011 13:18

Title: A New Dawn
Part: 4/?
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Mentions of previous torture and rape
Genre: Angst, AU
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, Owen, Tosh, Gwen
Summary: AU. The Torchwood team discover the truth about what happened on the Valiant and search for Jack. A dark fic.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: This is ( Read more... )

torchwood, doctor who, newdawn, jack harkness

Comments 22

seilenk June 21 2011, 14:07:09 UTC

I'm glad THAT at least lit a fire under someone's arse. They still really have no idea, do they?
Excellent chapter, as always. :) Keep up the excellent work!

ohinyan June 22 2011, 21:14:51 UTC

Yes, and if Ianto reacted that badly to just one event, you can imagine how he'll react when he learns the whole truth.

sr_71a June 21 2011, 14:26:40 UTC

wow....i mean good wow :D
its what i really looking for!!!
wow jack is so broken.
im really into h/c....jack is going to be comfort? right??

ohinyan June 22 2011, 21:17:02 UTC

Thanks. Yes Jack will be comforted, but they have to find him first, which is not easy.

ebbingnight June 21 2011, 14:42:38 UTC

"Things should be better for him after that."

I can't wait until they muster up the guts to watch the *rest* of those DVDs!

ohinyan June 22 2011, 21:18:23 UTC

Yes, it is going to be a mega shock for them.

“You're meant to die rather than be coerced into killing another person.” veritas6_5 June 21 2011, 17:38:57 UTC

Well, that's the defense, isn't it? Jack died so many times before he agreed to work for the Master, and probably again after killing, to be coerced again.

This has been an amazing series all the way through. Great work, even though it's hard to read sometimes.

Re: “You're meant to die rather than be coerced into killing another person.” ohinyan June 22 2011, 21:21:15 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Yes, the law does not allow for Jack's circumstances so they are going to have t make a special case for him and go right to the top.

evalentine99 June 21 2011, 19:13:36 UTC

“at least there is only another week to watch before Jack starts to work for the Master. Things should be better for him after that.”

Yeah Right = They are in for one hell of a shock becuase the torture did nto stop.

Great chapter, at last their eyes are being opened.

Yes Ianto is agitated, his heart is begining to grow several sizes as he finds his humanity.

ohinyan June 22 2011, 21:24:38 UTC

They are, and I know you think they deserve it. The "Deal" will be in the next chapter.

Ianto reacted badly to just one event of jack sacrificing himself for them, you can imagine how he'll feel when he finds out the whole truth.

Suffering! evalentine99 June 23 2011, 06:44:01 UTC

It’s clear at the beginning of this story Ianto has recovered from the events on the Valiant. He’s clearly in an important loving relationship. He’s been comfortable, loved and safe. I’m sure he never looked back once he had condemned Jack by his actions and testimony after Jack was handed over to UNIT ( ... )

Re: Suffering! ohinyan June 23 2011, 08:59:15 UTC

We will get to see a bit more of Ianto and Ellie's relationship in the upcoming chapters. And yes, Ianto had moved on. He is regretting his lack of concern for Jack now of course.

Even if Ianto and Ellie were not together I don't think that Ianto would expect Jack to want him back, after the way Ianto treated him.

There have been several chapters of the team and the DVDs but it has actually only covered a couple of days since the start of the story. Jack will be absent for a while yet.

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