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ohinyan

A New Dawn 3

Jun 15, 2011 19:42

Title: A New Dawn
Part: 3/?
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Mentions of previous torture and rape
Genre: Angst, AU
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, Owen, Tosh, Gwen
Summary: AU. The Torchwood team discover the truth about what happened on the Valiant and search for Jack. A dark fic.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: This is ( Read more... )

torchwood, doctor who, newdawn, jack harkness

Comments 20

evalentine99 June 15 2011, 19:35:11 UTC

Great to see an update. Hope you holiday was wonderful.

Their eyes are slowly opening. But they have so much futher to go.

Jack free but trapped in a nightmare of drugs and prositution. No dire urgency. I think that sums up the TW team.

Promise me they will view all the discs and get a true understanding of Jacks sacrifice.

ohinyan June 15 2011, 21:26:59 UTC

Thanks. We had a good time.

I think you will get your wish.

It wasn't too exciting of a chapter this time, but better than nothing I hope.

fic hagiel29 June 15 2011, 22:20:04 UTC

i hope this part end well soon your fic but a quit reding till some clouser more happy. til the end i got your in the freezer. You get me to emotional for my taste.After COE i skip angst.

Re: fic ohinyan June 16 2011, 07:14:12 UTC

Hi, this will eventually have a happy ending.

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ebbingnight June 15 2011, 21:07:56 UTC

Have a nice dinner, Owen. No hurry to get back to the evidence: after all, you're a reasonable man.

ohinyan June 16 2011, 07:22:03 UTC

Yes, Owen is not yet fully engaged with exonerating Jack.

ebbingnight June 16 2011, 13:54:53 UTC

To say the least, though Ianto is really not much better...

seilenk June 16 2011, 03:25:42 UTC

Excellent post. No, Owen, no urgency at all here. Jack's just in a downward spiral of drug addiction and prostitution, no big deal.
Though, to be fair, there's no way he would know that.
Thanks for the update, glad to hear the holiday went well. :3

ohinyan June 16 2011, 07:23:21 UTC

Yes, Owen is still on the fence regarding exonerating Jack. That won't last though.

Hopefully it won't be as long a wait for the next chapter.

domiantorules June 16 2011, 04:48:20 UTC

You're supposed to be torturing your characters, not the readers! I'm dying here. I've been checking for updates a dozen times a day, and this is all we get? Come on man, give us a break! At least have them learn SOMETHING new! It is a great story, but it is getting very hard on my nerves.

ohinyan June 16 2011, 07:19:51 UTC

I'm sorry, it was either post this short bit or wait at least another week while I catch up with everything that has piled up in real life while I've been away.

It should not be as long a wait for the next chapter as it was for this one.

sa_tsl June 17 2011, 03:42:23 UTC

Please more...

It's kind of good to see the team being pulled apart by guilt. They ripped a lot of Jack down by the way that they treated him when he was trying to help them.

I can't wait for the part where they find out how much jack sacrificed for them.

* hugs and cookies *

ohinyan June 17 2011, 21:46:08 UTC

The next chapter will be longer than this one, and will come fairly soon. Their guilt is going to ramp up.