Tiny Explorers

Dec 16, 2011 01:03


Title: Tiny Explorers
Spoilers: None.
Word Count: 1,191
Disclaimer: I do not claim any ownership of Doctor Who whatsoever.
Characters: Tenth Doctor, Rose Tyler
Summary: Written for the Then_There's_Us Challenge 91: AU. He's leaving, and she's staying, but he'll always come back home.


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silverlunarstar January 12 2012, 04:39:53 UTC
Can I just?

*Gushes for, like, ten minutes*

and when he is not looking, she adds in five extra pairs of socks.



like The Girl Who Is In Love and The Boy Who Isn’t.

Okay, so I cried. A little.

She had not expected him to write letters; he talked far too much and was far too impatient to sit down in one spot and actually pen down all those thoughts.

Lol, how true!

All she can do, and is doing; is wait. She will stay here and work, and he will travel but always come back.

She is home.

:(

This was gorgeous. Made me smile, laugh, and get a little teary eyed. I hope you write more on this because it's brilliant! Most definitely AU in the sense that, besides the fact that it's AH, it has Rose waiting. I hope that, in the end, she does join him, though.

Only one little thing: and she hopes that he feels the same way, and she thinks that she does as he puts an arm around her and pulls her into a tight hug.

I think you meant: and she hopes that he feels the same way, and she thinks that he does as he puts an arm around her and pull her into a tight hug.

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ohfortuneslost January 12 2012, 22:56:38 UTC
Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much. I didn't mean to make you cry though! I will definitely be writing more in this universe. At least two more. The hopes are that this will be a loose trilogy.

You are right of course about my little mistake, I will fix it shortly, thanks for pointing it out for me!

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silverlunarstar January 12 2012, 23:58:51 UTC
Glad to hear! Looking forward!

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