[[ SHINee ]] Just Like the Manga. 2/2.

[sacryde]

Fandom/Title - SHINee ; Just Like the Manga.
Author/Rating - Sacryde ; PG.
Pairing - Onew/Minho.
Status/Length - Incomplete ; 15,936.
Summary - See, Jinki is a writer - a bad one according to the rejection letters he's been receiving left, right, and center.
Author's Notes - This fic is incomplete and is going to stay that way for the rest of

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[weerainbow]

I bookmarked this ages ago, planning to read it shortly after then but never got round to it. I was checking through some old bookmarks yesterday and started reading last night then finished it off today and oh how I love this story. I really really love it.

I actually have a few tears in my eyes, not floods or anything but the kind of tears that I get when something beautiful gently makes my heart swell. The emotions in this story are something so special, I think largely because they are so subtle in many ways. Although Jinki's admiration of Minho is evident from the beginning it is still a gentle kind of growing of love that appears in his heart...I'm not sure I'm explaining this well but I hope you know what I mean.

And I adore the moments of fun, the times you made me giggle happily at what was going on like when Kibum would get overly excited hehe. I had a lot of smiles on my face while reading!

I really enjoyed the characterisations, of all the boys! Of course Jinki and Minho were beautifully balanced with each other and complimented each other in every way ahhhhh ^_____^ but also Kibum and Jonghyun and Taemin all brought their own flavour to the story in a way that made me believe they had years of stories behind them that I'd love to sit down and talk through with them.

I could probably write a book on moments I loved in this story but for now I'll settle with a couple of them.

First of all the moment that Jinki got jealous while seeing Minho and Kibum talking over the manhwa. I loved being in Jinki's head and seeing the development of his thoughts and how he was getting jealous of the closeness between the two awwww. Something about the way you wrote that scene made it come alive in a special way, like I was really seeing everything from Jinki's point of view so clearly.

And the second one I'm going to mention is I guess more than a moment once again (cos that was more about a whole scene and so is this lol) but the whole thing of Jinki waking up in the middle of the night and seeing Minho lying beside him and taking it as a dream was awesome!! I have seen similar things in stories before but this one jumped out...it was adorable and cute but also sweet and it was the first time I saw Minho's gaze at Jinki as being so tender. Weird to say this about a story I read but there was something in his eyes that was very special in the way he was looking at him. See? You made me feel it so real!

Ok I'm going to stop writing now before it really becomes a book. Let me just finish by...*launches self at you and hugs you for a very long time*
♥♥♥♥♥

[sacryde]

Oh my god. I love you. Like, legit, I just texted my boyfriend saying that my love for him comes second to you right now.

I hate this story so much. I think it's most of the reason that I've been unable to write for so long, because I was just stuck on the last scene for so freaking long that I eventually grew to hate it. Yet you say such amazing things about it. I legitimately have a few tears in my eyes right now.

Maybe I'll go back and read this again without trying to correct it and try to see what you see. Maybe then I'll be able to really make a comeback like I told you I would months ago. If I do, I'll be dedicating the first fic I come out with to you for making me cry in a good way.

;_________________;

Thank you bb. Your words really mean a lot to me.

[weerainbow]

I love you too sweetie!!! ♥♥ I hope your boyfriend is coping with the news hehehe ;) but really thank you for your reply. You're such a sweetheart.

I can't believe you could hate this story 0.o I can't even comprehend that...though I guess if you got frustrated with it you could lose sight of what makes it awesome. I hope you can find the loveliness in this by reading over it again with a fresh look. I would love you to see it as I did, the things that made me smile and that still do as I'm thinking about the story again.

I'm glad I could be a little of an encouragement to you my dear. Hopefully I will be again, not just for this time. Thank you for sharing your beautiful writing!!! ♥♥

[sacryde]

Haha, I figure if someone takes the time to comment on something I've written, the least I can do is reply. ^^; Because it would be easy to just read it then close the window lol.

Well it's a story full of frustration for me lmao. The plot came from my own frustration at not being able to write anything decent and then the last scene just killed it for me. XD But when I go back and read it I will sincerely try to not hate it lol, if for no other reason than the fact that no one else seems to. o_O;; so maybe I'm the one who isn't seeing it right and all.

I really really appreciate that so much bb, more than you can even know ;___; *tackles with giant hugs*