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Naruto: Battle Lust

Apr 14, 2010 23:39

Title: Battle Lust
Author: ofphenwa
Summary: A PWP. A time-travelling Naruto (who has been in the past for almost two years now and is in a relationship with Minato who happens to his not-so-dead dad and future Yondaime Hokage) nearly gets killed while saving Minato. After the battle is over, Minato and Naruto are still hyper and emotions are ( Read more... )

fic, naruto, minanaru

Comments 19

cyn_inc May 1 2010, 11:27:57 UTC

Woo, where did I put that fan now... hehe.
This was awesome. I'm going to add you to my f-list to keep an eye on future fics if you don't mind. :)

ofphenwa May 1 2010, 16:40:57 UTC

Oh thank you! Thanks for adding me. :)

ivy_tsuta May 2 2010, 17:05:37 UTC

Yesh~
Amazing, I loved it. It wasn't rushed and I-
This is just, wow. Yes, more. I love the pairing, as it's one of my favorites. I would love to see more from you.
I'm adding you, if you don't mind. :)

ofphenwa May 3 2010, 00:39:27 UTC

:D Thank you so much for reading and adding me! Yes, minato/naruto is one of my guilty guilty pleasures...which is why I wrote it. :P

ivy_tsuta May 3 2010, 01:24:10 UTC

Ah, no problem.

It's not a guilty pleasure for me, it's just a way of life. xD

But I'm really glad it is for you, so you can write more stories. Ah, that would be wonderful.

ofphenwa May 3 2010, 02:22:09 UTC

Haha. I am currently working another one. It's going to be a much longer work than the other one Chiaroscuro if you haven't read that already. ;P Thanks. :)

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ofphenwa May 3 2010, 00:39:52 UTC

Thank you for reading! :)

loke_21 May 29 2010, 05:08:39 UTC

So truthfully...I've never even considered these two as a couple....but now... Holy Bejesus! lol That was awesome and totally HOT! ;) I know this is a pwp...but my god...it was great and I love how you made Minato totally smitten and possessive and I totally wish you will write a prequel of this story. Like in the beginning. I mean...wow...you're good and I truly hope you consider writing more on them. :) I also read, The Hokage Office Is Not Meant For That! and Homecoming..I totally loved them too.I hope to read more, but if not....that's cool...it was still an enjoyable read. :)

ofphenwa May 29 2010, 13:16:32 UTC

Thank you! :D You're not the first one who has asked for a prequel...I have been considering writing a prequel but I've yet to hit a solid workable idea that does't leave Kushina out of the picture (I like her, really, I do). The fact that I'm also busy working on two other Naruto fics, one of which is for the Naruto Big Bang isn't helping! :P

I still have many more ideas for this verse, not to worry! While you're waiting, have you read the other Minato/Naruto fic of mine, Chiaroscuro as well? It's considerably darker in tone and is very different and a bit more plotty from this trilogy (admittedly all PWPs ;P).

Thank you for reading!
PS: How did you find out about this? And what made you interested since you said you never considered them as a couple?

loke_21 May 29 2010, 23:17:58 UTC

Awesome...you're thinking about it. yay! and yeah...I did read your other work Chiaroscuro, that was freaken awesome. Minato's feelings for Naruto are so intense. I loved it! lol ( ... )

ofphenwa May 30 2010, 00:04:57 UTC

Whoops! I didn't intend to convert you to the Minato/Naruto pairing! :P I also experienced the same problems you did when searching for such fic. I eventually got so frustrated that I decided I'd write me some good fic!;) I'm very flattered to hear that you think highly of my work and that it has set the standard - it's something no one has said to me before about my fic. :)

Sure, you're on the friends list!

jan_rea July 26 2010, 02:26:25 UTC

*squeals in delight* Minato x Naruto!! Such a sinfully delicious pairing~! I LOVED how you wrote the both of them, they seemed pretty in character to me, and the smut was just---!! (breathlessly fanning herself)

Incest is my secret fetish, and a Minato x Naruto pairing is just so rare that reading your fic is like finding a priceless gem~!

Hope you write more Minato x Naruto~!

*runs off drooling to read the smut scene again*

ofphenwa July 26 2010, 02:47:36 UTC

THANK YOU! :D I KNOW RIGHT. Minato/Naruto fics, especially well-written ones are so hard to find!

jan_rea July 26 2010, 02:52:24 UTC

Hahaha...I know, and it's good that you write such delicious ones~! *drools*

BTW, are there more good, slashy, wonderfuly Minato x Naruto fics out there?? I can't seem to find any...T_T

*chants* Must have more Minato x Naruto incest-y goodness!!!