[Tiger & Bunny] The Real Thing

[aphelion_orion]

Title: The Real Thing
Fandom: Tiger & Bunny
Pairing: Kotetsu/Barnaby
Rating: G
Contains: humor, TWT (timeline, what timeline?)

Comments

[megyal]

I was smiling all the way through it, because it was so very THEM.

[aphelion_orion]

Hee hee. Mission accomplished! :)

[suanz]

Kudos. *grins*

[aphelion_orion]

*salutes* Thank you.

[wickedorin]

This... is pitch-perfect and magnificent. Sweet, funny, and just so wonderfully dead-on. And thank you so much for the laugh that came from "'Keith's date did not pass the Turing test. Keith doesn't get a vote.'"

[aphelion_orion]

Aw, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it! Poor Keith's fail-date was one of the best moments on the show. I couldn't let the opportunity slip past. XD

[perkyandproud]

That rocked :-)

I agree about the way you managed to capture their essences and the part about Keith's date. *grin*

Nicely done!

[aphelion_orion]

Thank you! :) Sad thing is, even though Keith's date turned out to be a robot, it would still be more successful than any of Kotetsu and Barnaby's attempts at going out.

[perkyandproud]

True. And I still so very sad for him...

[sylphaen1637]

I'm not a huge fan of the Barnaby / Kotetsu pairing, but your writing's really good. I haven't seen someone handle long sentences and metaphors that well in quite a while; especially not in a humour fic, as those tend to use more simplistic vocabulary than drama or plot-heavy fics.

[aphelion_orion]

*bows* Thank you very much. Imo, a lot of humor comes from word choice and structure rather than sight gags, so I'm glad you think I've managed it well.