[Persona 4] A Collection of Strays

Jan 29, 2010 18:48


Title: A Collection of Strays
Fandom: Persona 4
Characters: Dojima & family
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Notes:  Happy Birthday, twigcollins♥!

Dojima, Souji, and homecooked food. )

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ultra_maniac March 12 2010, 09:08:08 UTC
This was beyond sweet and wonderful, it is exactly how I'd expect Dojima to act when Souji first moves in with him and Nanako. To go from having little life in the house to a house full of laughter and family, this really was something special.

I enjoyed this story wholeheartedly and think you did a wonderful job capturing all characters and interactions~ Kudos!

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aphelion_orion March 12 2010, 18:23:10 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

I really loved the whole family situation in P4. It was such a great addition to the plot, and they managed to break my heart in all the good ways.

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elektra_lite March 12 2010, 11:55:53 UTC
This was really good, thank you for writing it. :) (Says the random mysterious reader!)

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aphelion_orion March 12 2010, 18:26:08 UTC
Hello random mysterious reader! XD Seriously, don't worry about it. I really appreciate the feedback, and if you liked it, then so much the better. :3

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designer_ninja March 12 2010, 17:46:31 UTC
I don't normally comment of random people's fic, but this was fantastic.

I love your characterization. They all feel really spot on. Also, I have a huge weakness for cooking Souji.

This was delightful and perfect in every way.

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aphelion_orion March 12 2010, 18:27:39 UTC
*laughs* Thanks for the feedback. I really like the thought of cooking Souji myself, because the thought of him feeding half of Inaba is just too funny to let it pass by.

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sparkism March 12 2010, 21:19:47 UTC
awww, this was lovely! ♥

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aphelion_orion March 13 2010, 18:59:57 UTC
Glad you liked it. :3

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emotionalspazz March 13 2010, 02:50:39 UTC
How adorable! It's making my heart go to mush and ;A; cute. Makes me like Dojima that much more. ♥

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aphelion_orion March 13 2010, 19:00:39 UTC
XD That family broke my heart in so many ways when I was playing the game.

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