The Perfect Storm: One Red Pen's Fury

[ofarrell]

Below is my assignment, a response to the novel we must read for English.  My only regret is that this may mortally offend my instructor since she clearly holds the novel in high esteem.

The Perfect Storm Response

“Anything in direct quotes was recorded by me in a formal interview, either in person or on the telephone, and was altered as little

Comments

[armageddonriver]

Ugh. I have an immediate dislike of any work that dispenses with quotation marks to signify dialogue. Thank you. If mortal offense does indeed occur, spare no details in telling us of it!

[ofarrell]

It's a boo, I asked Kat for her professional opinion as an instructor and she had some constructive critiques. I feel less apprehensive about repercussions from my revamp.