win some, lose some - part three: august (2/3)

[of_hearts]

Glee. 7,228 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel.

The summer after Puck's junior year, picking up where we left off in August: Finn comes home and something changes.

For previous chapters: JUNE ( 1/1), JULY ( 1/2, 2/2), AUGUST ( 1/3)

A/N: So sorry for the ridicuously long wait for the second part of August! I'm going to be out of town for a bit, so

Comments

[of_hearts]

GRANDMASTER FUZZ. I'm sure my million year late comments are nothing new to you, but I still apologize. LOL TRAVEL? IDEK. Anyway, I think I look forward to your comments above all-- they're always so incredibly insightful and heartfelt with a side of lulz...Just the perfect combination. So glad you're still enjoying this. I knowwww, the cliffhanger was a pretty awful move, but it builds suspense, right???? I'm working on part three now, so hopefully you'll have the resolution coming your way soon!!

Is it wrong that I want it to stay summer forever? Like, in the moment when Puck and Rachel are finally connecting and reality is just some vague thing in the future?
IT'S NOT WRONG AT ALL. I WANT IT TO STAY SUMMER FOREVER FOR THEM AS WELL. In fact, I'm pretty close to writing an alternate version dedicated solely to lulzy summer fun and sexytimes. WHO NEEDS PLOT? LOL.

I love the discordant break between Rachel and Puck the moment Finn comes home. I love that Puck gets that it's over, even if he's realizing that he doesn't want it to be, even though neither of them get that it doesn't necessarily have to be.
I love the way you phrased this. It perfectly expresses what I was hoping to convey and just reaffirms the fact that you're made of sunshine and puppies.

I've got my angst pants ready for the next part
YOU MIGHT NEED A COUPLE SPARE PAIRS OF ANGST PANTS. JUST SAYIN'.

As always, Fuzz, your comments light up my life. Thank you a million times over for being so lovely and taking the time to both read and leave such personalized and delightful feedback. I'm so so happy you enjoyed this. And since I never responded to your last comment in my regular journal: HOMG YOUR PROMPT. MADE MY LIFE. I'm totally writing it once I get August (and cough cough it's sequel) done.