mcr // that day the color left

[odd_ities]

Title: That Day the Color Left
Pairing: Gerard/Bert, though no names are mentioned.
Rating: PG
Summary: You woke up that one morning and he was gone.
Author's Note: Prompted by jan 23 08. Block breaker; I apologize for possible lack of coherence and sense.

Comments

[katiewindow]

That was the most beautiful thing I've read in quite some time.
The descriptions weren't exactly short, but not exactly long as well.
But they flowed and connected very nicely.
You painted a picture in my mind with your words and even though they were dull, they were still alive.
I loved this.
It was wonderful.
Mems for sure.

[janes_heirloom]

This is really nice. I don't usually like second person, but this just drew me in. I kept coming back to it...

I really like it all, you have a beautiful way with words. Nice work.

[snugglebud_x3]

description is beautiful and i love it a lot. muchmuchmuch love.