Weasly twin drabble!

Mar 09, 2003 00:00

Yay! 839 words of pure Weasley twin! Well, except not, cause there's other parts people in there as well... Anyway, it's not twincest and it's sort of like drabble [except not, since it's far, far over 100 words] in that it started as one and I spent about 45 minutes on it. ...And then twice more that with reishin trying to figure out a title for it ( Read more... )

writing, harry potter, fic

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glockgal March 14 2003, 08:07:35 UTC
Weasley twins! *happy sigh* Oh be still my joyful heart. And from Fred's point of view! That's wonderful. Cause we all know Fred doesn't get as much play.

I love the list of differences that you have created. It's like, so many of these differences? Are only things a twin would spot. To the third person, yes, they would seem on entity, and your fic has proved that. But to one half of twins? Differences like sleeping during rainstorms and sharp intakes of breath are, truly, legitimate reasons.

Like you know that if Fred ever tried to explain this to, say, Lee, Lee would just be like "Erm, okay, mate. You're different. I guess. Just...enough, okay? You're kinda creeping me out." Because....because! Fred knows. He really does, truly know all the little, tiny, miniscule differences between him and his brother. Every single one right down to the way George's fingers unconsciously brush his lips when he laughs. To anyone else, that attention to detail would just be scary. But to a twin, it just makes sense.

It's wonderfully written. I love how you're able to follow Fred's thought patterns, right down to the tangents he goes off on (like about Sprout's negotiable gender or his own drawing skillz) and then he pulls himself back on track. It's like reading stream-of-consciousness without the easily annoying style of stream-of-consciouness.

And! Twins! *goes mad* I love the twins so badly.

And George is the gay twin! High five to that.

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octopussy March 16 2003, 22:42:29 UTC
*loves you*

Hehe, yes, I was sitting there thinking of WTF is different between my and my sister? My sister is a year younger than me and indeed we are quite a stoopid retarded mischievous duo. But we have a lot of differences so I thought I'd cash in on that but everything I thought of was dumb, like, "oh yeah she likes Buffy and I don't." ...So I had to disconnect myself from that completely because that is so not what I wanted for Fred and George. I'm glad it worked for you because I think that is what it might be like for people as unimaginably close as those two. <3

And oh yes, I must run off now because I have sooooo much to respond to that you've left me in my inbox and I just can't start getting into it now because then I'll be up all nite and I really must be off. So tomorrow I will LOVE you properly, or as LL Cool J sez, Luv U Better. *slaps herself* Okay, going away now.

Well first let me just say how I love -- *stops self while she can*

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