The colors of life 10

Feb 13, 2009 17:30

wohoo I have to say I'm proud about myself, I didn't stop writing and this is my 10th chapter. well I hope I'm going to upload Weird neighbors soon because I'd like to see what do people think

I'd like to thanks you so much for your support because it really means a lot for me, I'm not good in many things and yes I know I still have to learn about writing and I'm not going to be as good as others

so please tell me your opinion
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Addison went to the graveyard to change the flowers on the James's and Mark's graves.

"Hi Mark, hey my darling son, I don't have so many things to say. I'm sorry that I was screaming last time, I'm sorry. You know Archer, he is at the hospital, he had a brain surgery because he was in the accident and he took drugs so it is hard for him........Carly, she is perfect, she is one of the best student in her class, she and Maya, you know Naomi's girl are friends now, they are totally in love with Charmed, they watch it in the French tV and in the American satellite Tv and they and Betsy, the little girl of our Dell, they are Piper and Pheobe and Prue and also the little one girl Vanessa of our neighbor is there too. Our Charmed girls. Carly is Piper of course, she is the piece maker. James would like it here, so many chicks are here, you would have a beautiful girlfriend......I miss you, I miss you so much. I can imagine you James, like you're playing the guitar with Kurt Cobain and your dad have a talk with John Lennon and you make fun of him because come one Beattles?! Wait for me there because one day I'll come, I promise one day we will be together again"

and with that words she left, she went away and she knew it was the last time for the long time

She was done with it, she was done with New York, with happy life, she was done with it.

Mark and James didn't fight for their life, she was done with them, they didn't fight, they didn't try, they left her there alone so now now it's her turn and she is moving, She is in France. One year is enough, it's enough.

It was the day when they are moving. Addison packed her things, she send Archer's things to France, she called Naomi and send all the Christmas presents to France, called Carly to told her that she is coming and went to the hospital to check if Archer is ready to go to helicopter.

When she checked on Archer she went to see Derek if he is ready, he was a great supporter for all these days when she was there and they become closer to each other.

"so today is this day"
"yeah this day" he gave her this famous smile and finally he was happy
"so are you ready?" she really wasn't sure how to make the right conversation
"yes I'm more than ready"
"good so at 6 pm?"
"see you at 6"

Derek was thinking about all these things in his life which he messed up. Can he be finally happy in France? What about this girl Addison? she was the wife of his ex best friend isn't it awful? and he is still married, no his marriage ...... he can't forget about his wife. What if she come? Where is she? what is she doing?

Addison was ready, she was calm and fine with all facts, she was ready to take care about Archer, to help him with all these things. She was ready to be a good and better mum to Carly.

(6 pm, New York City)

"so here we go we're leaving"
"yeah finally"

finally, yes New York was just like big awful stone and they were happy to leave it there

Derek was wondering what will come, Addison was wondering what will come and Archer just wanted to have his perfect life back

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so now you know about Derek's wife :D I didn't want to tell you but it just comes so yes he is married and how it will go with him and Addison hmm I'm not sure yet

so what do you thing? good? bad?
thanks for reading please leave a comment :)

fanfiction: the colors of life

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