[fic post] Here Goes Nothing

[oceansex]

Title: Here Goes Nothing
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance/Angst
Pairings or Characters: Kakashi/Sakura
Warnings: explicit sex. as there always should be with these two involved. ;D
Word Count: 3723
Summary: Kakashi was sure it was only temporary. Kakashi is often wrong.
Author Notes: Another request for katanaxmistress, this time based on Kelly Clarkson's cover of

Comments

[surmise]

By the way, have I mentioned that I love you? *___*

THIS WAS FREAKING GOOD. The beginning I was like "I wonder how she's gonna incorporate the song..." and then, near the middle and end, I was like "HOLYFUCKINGSHITYESTHIS."

You did an absolutely awesome job, dearest ♥ And the first-person POV was good! It's nice to see the inside of our favorite jounin ;]

[oceansex]

haha, I'm always happy to hear it. x3 <3

I'm glad you could tell how it related, 'cause I keep being insecure and debating with myself. XD I wasn't sure if I wanted the song's influence to be incredibly blatant or subtle, so I hope it evened out in the end.

thank you~ <333 like I told you before, this is my first time using first POV with Kakashi, so I'm uber nervous about how well or even if I kept him in character at all. XD as much as I love getting into his head, it's extremely hard to write without feeling like I'm getting him completely wrong. @_x;; orz.

[surmise]

Muahahaha. ♥

It was really nice, actually, how you did it. It was gradual and the parts of the lyrics you used just hit it home. *__*

IT'S GOOD. OH SO VERY GOOD, BB. You did an awesome job on it! Nobody knows what goes on inside other people's heads, but I'm sure you've got the inkling of it. I give ya t'props <33

[naureen_rally]

that was so good!!! yay! too bad I suck at writing KakaSaku as well as you.

agree with katanaxmistress, the first POV was epic.. I think that got me all flustered thinking that this was what kakashi was thinking while screwing sakura

[oceansex]

thank you! and while I'm flattered, you shouldn't put yourself down like that, though. they're a hard couple to write. XD;;

I'm glad you think so, too. x3 and I agree that (even if I'm not confident with how it turned out) hearing what's going on in Kakashi's head is definitely squee-worthy lol

[zelha]

Beautiful! I love when Kakashi is so full of bullshit, hahaha. Dork. :'D

[oceansex]

thank you! he's just so cute when he's in denial. <3

[seigetsuko]

Wow, this was awesome!!! I loved it - KakaSaku is becoming my new favorite pairing to ship... Plz to keep the writings up - kthx! *^^*

[oceansex]

thanks! I'm always happy to hear someone else is falling for the pairing. ;D and you can bet you'll see more KakaSaku from me! <3

[gwoman]

love!

[oceansex]

<3