Comments | oceansex: [fic post] A Kiss for Luck

oceansex

[fic post] A Kiss for Luck

Mar 08, 2009 22:26

I'm starting to think I spend far too much time writing fanfiction, lol.

Title: A Kiss for Luck
Rating: G
Genre: Angst/Romance
Pairings or Characters: Kiba/Hinata, Naruto/Hinata
Warnings: none
Word Count: 1,225
Summary: When Hinata decides to confess, Kiba wishes her luck.
Author Notes: Despite being a huge NaruHina supporter, I still find the ( Read more... )

pairing -- kiba/hinata, !fic, rating -- [g], pairing -- naruto/hinata, naruto

Comments 31

lovely_zombie March 9 2009, 04:35:22 UTC

... That was so incredibly sweet and sad, I adored it! :3
I love NaruHina and I love the idea of Kiba, in a sense, letting her go, giving her to Naruto.
ashfddjhdf it was just lovely. /mems

oceansex March 9 2009, 04:51:51 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I absolutely adore Kiba, and I love the idea of him being in love with her and still being supportive of her feelings for Naruto. he certainly gets the short end of the stick romantically, but that just makes him as a character so much more lovable. <3

sanee_ftw March 9 2009, 04:47:04 UTC

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oceansex March 9 2009, 04:52:52 UTC

^____^;;

peekaydee March 9 2009, 04:57:06 UTC

... Adorable.

That was seriously so cute ;A; I love how you write Kiba - he's sounds so much like a big brother <33 But it broke my heart towards the end, even though I don't like KibaHina too much 3: /wibbles&mems

oceansex March 9 2009, 05:14:46 UTC

thank you for commenting and meming! x3

I like to think that if Kiba's onesided love isn't canon, he at least still loves her like a big brother (and Shino does too, lol).

peekaydee March 9 2009, 17:39:07 UTC

lol xD I like to see that Kiba + Shino are just her big brothers, and Kurenai's their mommy x3

oceansex March 9 2009, 19:06:46 UTC

I'm glad they're not actually related, or I'd have just written incest and that would freak me out a little bit. >_> (though oddly nejihina doesn't bother me much, lol)

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hooves March 9 2009, 05:33:43 UTC

I know nothing about Naruto, BUUUUUT I saw this and wanted to comment: [I'm starting to think I spend far too much time writing fanfiction, lol.]

NO SUCH THING. 8D

I'm totally not saying this because I'm biased.

oceansex March 9 2009, 05:40:32 UTC

THEN I SHALL NO LONGER WORRY ABOUT IT! 8D <33

lol of course not bb.

krysyuy March 9 2009, 07:38:39 UTC

Aww, sadness. T_____T I really loved it though! *huggles Kiba* I love me my NaruHina, but I do admit my secret crush on KibaHina. In the manga, we don't get much in regards to Kiba's feelings towards Hinata (other than that they get along really well - btw, am I the only one wanting to know Kiba's reaction to Hinata's actions in 437? ^^;;), but this is an interesting scenario that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Kiba was adorable and the good luck kisses made my heart melt. I love how they "weren't that big a deal" to him and how he got them "all the time", so he couldn't see why she was so "weirded out". A bit on the clueless side when it comes to some things. ^o~ Hehehehe! ♥ Oh, Kiba. I should love you more. And he definitely broke my heart in the end with his dialogue to Akamaru. T_T But it was sweet that he was genuinely happy for her, though. Amazing job! ♥ ♥ ♥

oceansex March 9 2009, 07:51:14 UTC

thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

you aren't alone; I would absolutely love to find out his (hell, everyone's!) reaction to her confession in 437. it would probably either be a laugh or a disappointed expression and "It's about damn time" lol. and twelve year old boys are always clueless. x3 oh, I just love kiba, but I tend to be a bit mean to him in fics. *feels guilty*