Mar 22, 2007 17:51
I haven't even rewatched this episode yet, but I already remember a scene I wish we had seen. Dawn and Ryan spend the day together after their painful poolhouse talk. We know some of what they did from the conversation with Seth and Kirsten when they return. But I'd love a story that would fill in the details--Dawn's reaction to Newport, Ryan's uncomfortable/unfamiliar role as tour guide, and especially how they arrived at plans for a house in the numbered streets, and Ryan's guarded optimism that maybe he might get his mother back.
I'd write it myself, but I'm too far behind on my neglected WIPs. However, I promise extended feedback to anyone who will write this.
ryan atwood,
dawn atwood,
bunny needs home,
missing scene,
season 1