Comments | obstinatrix: Fic: Every Square Inch, Every Split Second (Sam/Dean, NC-17)

obstinatrix

Fic: Every Square Inch, Every Split Second (Sam/Dean, NC-17)

Mar 28, 2011 16:24

Title: Every Square Inch, Every Split Second
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sam's fifteen when he finally outgrows his brother. (NB: underage.)
Words: 3,784
Notes: Written for my fictictactoe game against mistyzeo, for the square 'pride'. Um. Very, very loosely. I did have an excellent plan for a J2 fic that I discussed with oddlyfamiliar, and then I opened a document to ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, sam/dean, fic, supernatural, slash, spn, fps

Comments 68

heard_the_owl March 28 2011, 15:48:45 UTC

BRAVO! BRAVO!! SUPER BIG LOVE FOR THIS!!! ♥ and :D

Constructive review can not be given at this time since my smile is so big it's obstructing my brain. Thanks so much for sharing this.

obstinatrix March 29 2011, 10:18:44 UTC

:D Thank you!

mistyzeo March 28 2011, 16:23:26 UTC

\o/

ok reading now

mistyzeo March 28 2011, 16:31:48 UTC

omg unfff: rolling into Sam like thunder sexiest line evar. i love how sweet and brothery and schmoopy this is! delicious.

obstinatrix March 29 2011, 10:19:10 UTC

:D Yay! Thanks, bb. ♥

akadougal March 28 2011, 16:27:42 UTC

First it was FOR ALL THAT IS HOLY and GUH then it was AWWWW. That is all.

obstinatrix March 29 2011, 10:19:23 UTC

SCHMOOP WARNING. *grins*

13chapters March 28 2011, 16:28:26 UTC

ummm...i just skimmed this cause of being at work and all but SIZE KINK. GOOD IDEA.

will read for comprehension later.

13chapters March 29 2011, 00:43:38 UTC

Okay, this is really lovely and hot and I adore Dean's delusion. And Sam's little conspiratorial exchange with John...it's just a tiny moment, bit I adore it.

<333

obstinatrix March 29 2011, 10:20:28 UTC

I have this bizarre side-interest in Sam's relationship with John - I had no intention of putting him in this fic, but he upped and inserted himself, idk.

Anyway, thank you! :)

chemm80 March 28 2011, 17:12:40 UTC

Well, intentionally directed or not, you grabbed that little prompt by the scruff of the neck, beat it into submission and wrung every bit of good stuff out of it. Geez. This is as well-described as any PWP I've ever seen. There's something about this:

He's got one hand in the meat of Sam's thigh, bruisingly tight, and Sam's teetering on his tiptoes but there isn't any danger, not really - not with Dean pressed up hard against him, Dean's wrist working between his legs.

I think it's something about the word "wrist"? Anyway, it's a short sentence, but it generated a really clear visual in my mind.

I liked this a lot, hon.

obstinatrix March 29 2011, 10:21:41 UTC

I love the word 'wrist'. There's something about it, if you say it enough times it starts to seem like it can't possibly be a word, really. ;)

Thank you! :) ♥