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[One-shot] My safe haven

Oct 31, 2011 23:52

Title: My safe haven.
Pairing: Sakumoto
Ratings: PG-13
Disclaimer: I only own the storyyyy
Summary: For this prompt in the arashi_anonmeme kink meme [Sho has amnesia, someone searches for him and finds him in a dark, dangerous place - which is supposedly some underground auction selling people for questionable purposes. At first the person (of your choice) ( Read more... )

g: au, r: pg-13, c: sakurai sho, g: angst, !one-shot, c: matsumoto jun, p: sakumoto

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jaricchi October 28 2012, 12:32:45 UTC

to be honest, it's really well done. but i think it's going to fast, (or maybe its because you time skip a lot). The characterization isn't so fully evolved, but this it has potential. And I'm sorry if I'm rambling, I didn't mean to sound rude.

This IS, emphasis on the IS, A REALLY GOOD FIC. I hope to read more and more power to you! :d I like broken Sho! :3

obstilation October 30 2012, 05:31:40 UTC

It's alright! I personally think that this went too fast too. I think it's because I have this bad habit of wanting to get straight to the ending I have in mind so I tend to skip over a lot of things! No worries about sounding rude! I'm all open to critics and opinion and I'm thankful that you've decided to share them with me!

I'm really glad you think so though I'm not sure if there would be anymore from this universe! I adore broken Sho :B

Ps. I can stare at your icon forever

jaricchi October 31 2012, 06:45:17 UTC

8'D~♥ But aside from those, you're a really awesome writer! Power to you and your fics!

D'awww, but that's okay! And me too! I absolute ADORE broken Sho! (Hence, why I love writing them xP)

P.S.Thanks haha, I have a lot of Sho icons that I haven't uploaded bec they're much too large for LJ. :P

obstilation November 1 2012, 14:56:59 UTC

Aw, you just made me very very happy 8D ahaha xD

There's something about Sho being so... Broken that is just unf in all the right places. I think it might be the influences from TQS2. That drama was perfect! And you have all my encouragement and motivation to write more :p hehehe

D'aw, Sho is so adorable in that icon! I only have a few and i don't even use the rest mainly because I'm lazy and often forget i have other icons other than my current Aiba one xD

jaricchi November 3 2012, 20:26:48 UTC

8D I'm glad~♥

I know!! And i completely agree, as much as I enjoy a ...stupid, happy Sho (Yoiko no Mikata was love) but I simply enjoy seeing the occasional broken up him and when I watched TQS2, my wish came true!!! And thanks, I'm working on a broken Sho right now. It's a fem!Sho and lah~

I know!! Partly why I used it in the first place. haha That's fine too. Your Aiba icon is adorable! 8D~♥

btw, can I add you as a friend. If I haven't already?

obstilation November 5 2012, 10:10:15 UTC

Yoiko no mikata was adorable!! Just so smiley and cute <3 Totally agree with you! How I wish for there to be another broken Sho drama :3 Haha oh my! I'm looking forward to it! 8D

Hehe, Aiba is just so photogenic. He's not my bias but I have him as my icon/display picture almost everywhere! :D

feel free to! Though this is nothing more than just a fic journal >_< Ahaha

jaricchi November 6 2012, 09:09:56 UTC

IKR!!! :D The closest one to a broken Sho this year was Black Board, you should definitely watch it if you haven't already! And as for the fic...it turned out to be very different from what I imagined...but oh well. Broken Sho is Broken Sho. And thanks! 8D

IKR~ I know that feeling. I have Tego's face everywhere because his smile just brights up the world. XDDD

Yay! ILU~♥

obstilation November 8 2012, 00:08:42 UTC

Really? I haven't watched because I wasn't very interested in it xD maybe I should give it a try :B Hahaha, mine always turns out different from what I've imagined but haha i agree, broken sho is broken sho xD *flexes biceps*

Hahaha! Tego is adorable but i like massu more xD either ways, bother their smiles are amazing 8D

♥

jaricchi November 8 2012, 09:10:40 UTC

well, it's a little different from the usual Sho we're used to actually. A little hard to swallow because it's POST WW2, but I believe its just like watching TQS2, something different of Sho. idk, I just liked BlackBoard, but yeah, give it a try. :) it was actually beautiful~

broken sho is love~ *gazes at the muscles reverently*

XD Massu is cute and true, their smiles are amazing. It's almost as if they practice infront of the mirror everyday just to perfect it. hahaha but all know Arashi don't need it~

♥

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