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Chapter 16 - A lightning before death.

Jan 16, 2010 23:34

“No, no, no.” Junsu whispered brokenly, a single lone dewdrop slipping free of its crystal chasm to peel past his curled lashes, trembling down a slightly quavering cheek with each shallow, heaving breath. He bit down harshly upon his bottom lip, stifling the unbidden tremors that clawed through his thin frame, wracking his hunched shoulders, his ( Read more... )

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obsidianinks January 16 2010, 15:41:45 UTC

SPOT~! (^_^) for ekin_hardy, Ting5 and succexytop~

*pumps hand* yayyyyy! i did it!! i finished it!! i wasted precious time to finish this over the weekend, but i think its worth it and i cant just let you guys wait for long can i?? ^^ i hope to see many many loving comments!!*wags finger* hehehe, nah joking.. now i have to go finish my mountain of homework.. *sigh*

im quite happy with this chapter for some weird reason.. i just love the yunjae moment i think, and jaes inability to express his emotions in front of others except yunho... *aww* anyways, i hope you guys like it!! :)

ekin_hardy January 16 2010, 22:05:43 UTC

yup,yup me likes it mel~~~

the yunjae melts my frustration with yoosu away....its sooo sweet with yunjae...

but my yoosu...u make me hungry for nxt chappie...why junsu reacts like that...

and jj's gone? dont tell me he's on a solo mission to save his sis....

and gudluck with ur homework dear...hwaiting!!!!

om...its 6.04am...u r supposed to b awake while i'm just abut to sleep...wat happen to my normal sleeping time again?*sigh*

obsidianinks January 18 2010, 03:20:15 UTC

hee~! yunjae.. *skips around*

yoosu?? heheh sorry, sorry, ill make it up to you in the next chapter with a very BIG lengthy section of the story on the both of them.. ^^

jaes on a... #### ^^ cant reveal yet.. *gets bricked*

OMG, 6?? dam, i went to bed around 2.. even with drinking two cups of coffee.. o.O YOU ARE STRONG~~

ting5 January 18 2010, 01:04:05 UTC

I'm so late ne *bows in apology*

sweet YunJae they are getting closer and closer and closer do they even realise d it :D

Oh my Jae's gone...did he went alone to save his sis, aish Yunho-ah pls go after him..

Ohhh Yoosu, me cant wait to read abt Yoosu, why Su reacted as he did and all..

P.S. gd luck with homeworks *hug for encouragement*

obsidianinks January 18 2010, 03:22:45 UTC

*huggles* you had me worried~!! *waggles finger* hnn~ ^^ its ok, im just glad you managed to write a comment even though you were busy..

yay for yunjae love!! boo for yoosu, but it'll be a big YAY! in the next chapter for yoosu.. su's tears will be washed away.. :)

thks!! im gonna start on my homework right now~ *puts on geeky glasses* (^_^)

ting5 January 18 2010, 07:11:37 UTC

*sigh* the perks of not having my laptop..dont even know what's taking so long for the technician to fix it..I'm stuck with stealing my sister's laptop to use whenever I can..

Ohh I cant wait for Yoosu ^^ good to know Su's tears will stop ^^

LOL geeky are you sure XDD

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