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Gorgeous Carat fic: Beast

Jun 19, 2007 20:50

Title: Beast
Author: Astraplain
Fandom: Gorgeous Carat
Characters/Pairing: Ray x Florian
Rating: Mature for language and m/m content
Summary: It started with an elaborate lie...
Challenge: June '07
Challenge song: #56. Temptation by The Tea Party
Notes: thank you to my marvelous beta reader, Gayle.

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author: astra, 2007 june, gorgeous carat

Comments 6

sharz June 20 2007, 02:19:09 UTC

Oh great! It's always good to see Florian show a bit of backbone or take initiative :D

astraplain June 21 2007, 01:21:51 UTC

Thank you! Florian might not match Ray in knowledge, but he certainly doesn't lack backbone and determination. Oh, and he let Ray off really lightly so far... but he knows about the lie and he's already got a plan...

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astraplain June 21 2007, 01:25:52 UTC

Thank you so much! GC is so much fun to write, I wish it had more fanfic.
Considering Ray's reactions in the manga, I think Florian will have to be the one to take the initiative for any serious intimacy - and he'll enjoy it too.

tsuzuki_ruka June 21 2007, 00:00:47 UTC

... *thud*... Just... *thud* Beautiful and sweet. *snickers* I was waiting for someone to do the Beauty and the Beast thing... Thank you for the wonderful fic!! *favorites*

astraplain June 21 2007, 01:30:00 UTC

Thanks!! Oddly enough, I didn't intend using BatB for this story at all -it just happened during the writing process. I was going to do more with the lie - and the fact that Florian had seen through it from the start. It was inevitable though, since the BatB reference is in the manga. Besides, Florian has his beastly moments as well - so he and Ray are well matched.

tsuzuki_ruka June 21 2007, 01:43:36 UTC

lol I noticed that reference, too. It amused me (though it disturbed me slightly after Azura came on the scene...) to no end.