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Jun 22, 2009 17:03

He is like a freight train, a fucking freight train with the breaks cut.

He’s feeling this, this pulsing, a banging in his ears, blood rushing rushing rushing.

It’s a rush, such a rush, something like a feeling but better, maybe like drugs, not like being drunk, because being drunk is tingly and warm, but it’s slow.  Things don’t feel fast and ( Read more... )

running, bones, the bar exam, fanfic, booth/brennan

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giddyfilly June 23 2009, 00:39:36 UTC
This was great - I could literally feel the tempo speed up as the fic progressed.

It’s a rush, such a rush, something like a feeling but better, maybe like drugs, not like being drunk, because being drunk is tingly and warm, but it’s slow. Things don’t feel fast and hot when you’re drunk, but this feels hot. This feels fast.
The rhythm kept up the image of the freight train perfectly, building up as it went on.

what the fuck else could be important
Very, very true. I wish TPTB of the show would see it that way.

P.S. regarding finding distractions, yeah, I know exactly what you mean - I'm currently writing my dissertation and the things I do to get away from it!
I haven't seen the Transformers movies either, so I don't know how they are, but have fun :)

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obrien_blue June 29 2009, 20:24:27 UTC
Thanks for reading and responding. And seriously, TPTB, let these people have sex. It's just incredibly unreal that they aren't sexin', like, every day.

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doc_3 June 23 2009, 01:26:28 UTC
Very interesting premise for a drabble. The intense pacing sort of sucks you in, in a good way. :)

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ama_blue June 23 2009, 04:35:44 UTC
Hehe 'No Sex for Ben' is so catchy! Just want to add to the love for that song. It's like Boom Boom Pow by the Black Eyed Peas where they are basically saying nothing at all, but it's still effin' brilliant.

I really enjoyed the first Transformers movie. I'm going to see the sequel with one of my guy friends too, but can't see it at midnight as my boss is having a party tomorrow night (so random...). Anyway, I'm very excited. You'll have lots of fun! I'm jealous you'll get to see it before me. :)

And I loved your drabble!

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a_mistletoe June 23 2009, 19:46:58 UTC
I have a running icon, but it's so hot here that's as close as I'm getting.

Drabble was a rush. I could feel the music (and other things) *g*

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obrien_blue June 29 2009, 20:25:14 UTC
UM YOUR ICON MADE ME DROOL IN PUBLIC. Oh,, God. Where did that come from?!

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a_mistletoe June 29 2009, 21:07:09 UTC
It was made by ataralasse who seems to have disappeared from fandom. The pics were from a magazine spread where DB was jogging, saw a guy without his shirt jogging, possibly saw the cameraman and flaunted his bod in typical exhibitionist fashion!

Loved your last two fics btw. I could hear Booth on the plane saying what being a knight meant to him. It was just like his vicodin fantasy in The Princess and the Pear.

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obrien_blue June 29 2009, 21:10:21 UTC
DB should always = flaunting. PLEASE FLAUNT. DO THIS, DB.

Oh, God, Booth should always be on vicodin. "Booth says it makes the furniture feel more friendly?"

I think I want to write this. A vicodin-fuled B/B convo. Oh the funny. And I'm glad you liked the knight talk; it was fun to write!

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alias_jems June 23 2009, 21:25:28 UTC
Boyfriend is out of town for the next few days, meaning I have the apartment to myself for a little bit. I'll miss him, but it is nice to have one's own space every now and then. And it means I can buy food without fear of his consuming it immediately upon its entrance into the house. And that I can watch Bones on DVD and squeal all I want, and even rewind the best scenes, because he is not there to make fun of me.

Same for me!

Love the drabble. Very rushed and kinda crazy. I like it! Very first time crazy thoughts!!!

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obrien_blue June 29 2009, 20:25:38 UTC
Iconprettyiconmmmm.

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