and the clouds are breaking now

May 22, 2014 17:10

kyungsoo/joonmyun | nc-17 | 5934 words
single parent!au. good weather, warm hands, and the right kind of tea.

originally written and posted here for partybutts over at suholiday's 2014 birthday round as a pinch-hit. teehee.

The split is amicable. )

f: exo, p: fanfiction, e: suholiday, r: nc-17, s: kyungsoo/joonmyun

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c_ryingwolf May 22 2014, 11:24:15 UTC
can i just ---- oh my god, wha tthe fluff that was too cute for words aqazxswdcfrgbhujnmmkoplm!!111!!!!1!!

“But that’s okay,” Jimin had said, “you’re more than enough, dad.”
oh my god jimin you make me cry of happiness, you angel

Not wanting the conversation to slip, he asks, “So, which tiny terror is yours?”
TINY ERROR HEHEHEHAHAHAHHUHUH OMG

It’s in the car later, on the way home, that Jimin asks, “So, you met Nayoung’s dad today, right?”
“I did,” says Joonmyun simply, hands on the steering wheel, and eyes ahead. “He’s very nice.”
“Good,” says Jimin, and he settles back into his seat, occupying himself with the knobs of the radio.
Joonmyun glances over at him momentarily. “Is that all you have to say?”
“Yeah,” says Jimin, settling on the rock station.
i swear to god this kid is something, YOURE UP TO SOMETHING ARENT YOU?!

Jimin sniffs. “I’m too big for teasing.”
“You’re ten,” reminds Joonmyun, smiling as he picks his newspaper back up, “wait twenty more years, hmm?”
“Daaaad.”
best father-and-son relationship ever im jelly

“Okay ( ... )

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teddyescher May 22 2014, 11:52:39 UTC
OH MY GOD I'M SCREAMING AHHHHH this comment was so sweet and nice ;3; thank you so much

i'm so glad you enjoyed it omg really <3 thank you for reading!

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c_ryingwolf May 22 2014, 12:04:29 UTC
OH OKAY WE CAN SCREAM TOGETHER THEN :D

cue the scream,
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHH lol wtf i swear im too weird for my own good

awww im glad that my comment made you scream was nice and sweet enough hehe :3, coz i really cant be sweet its kinda sad .-.

no worries darls, it was definitely worth the read <3 <3

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teddyescher May 22 2014, 12:24:33 UTC
AHHHHH you are so cute omg

<3

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assukko May 22 2014, 20:46:06 UTC
i never ever read anything domestic. the idea of exo being old and having kids is kind of weird to me. but im really glad i read this. this was really sweet and cute!!

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teddyescher May 25 2014, 13:26:37 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhh omg thank you for reading ;u; glad you enjoyed it, then!

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xxhna May 24 2014, 06:14:06 UTC
Jimin is AWESOME. I

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teddyescher May 25 2014, 13:26:53 UTC
ikr hehe :3 tq for reading!

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ext_1076761 May 29 2014, 13:53:30 UTC
why so beautiful ;A;
I think the timing is so good--not too fast, not too slow, I can enjoy every moment until junmyeon and kyungsoo become a real couple <3
please live happily ever after <3 <3 <3
thanks for writing this! sorry for the short comment I just can't say many things because this is just so...KYAAAAA~~~ x3

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teddyescher May 31 2014, 07:15:48 UTC
cries ahhh thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it uwu

thank you so much for reading! <3

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aeries_amethyst May 29 2014, 22:12:45 UTC
I WAS SQUEALING RIGHT THROUGH THIS BECAUSE OF ALL THE FLUFF AND UGH, DOMESTIC!KYUNGMYUN IS KILLING MEEEEEEE WITH THEIR AWKWARD ADORKABLENESS AND WHO CARES IF THEY HAVE KIDS ANYWAYS BECAUSE THEIR KIDS ARE AWESOME SO THEY CAN BE THE CUTEST LITTLE FAMILY EVER!!! XD

Ok, lemme calm my ovaries now and try being coherent lol OTL

This was a refreshing read for me. It's different from a lot of the stories I usually read, especially regarding these two in particular. I liked how their relationship progressed and how everything just fell into place with them. Nothing seemed rushed or strained and I genuinely enjoyed the characterizations and the plot. It wasn't over the top but it was simple enough without the feeling of being predictable. Props to you for this great work!

Though on a serious note, I am so sure that Nayoung and Jimin were scheming together to hook up their parents from the beginning because it was so obvious lol ;P If I have a son, I want him to be like Jimin...I would spoil him so much >.Thank God that Joonmyun and Kyungsoo ( ... )

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teddyescher May 31 2014, 07:16:35 UTC
SCREAMS AHHHH THANK YOU FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT owo

this really made my day thank you so much
and i'm glad you liked it! c: thank you so much for reading!

bless you

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