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ALRIGHT YOU WONDERFUL LOVELY ADORABLE PEOPLE OF MY FRIEND'S LIST! MAY I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION PLZ~
Okay so
Last night I finished an app for this game and stuff, but me being me I kinda suck at grammar and stuff
so I am posting my app here
and I was wondering if any of you would like to beta my app? If you know PEACEMAKER KUROGANE it would be awesome if you could tell me if my samples are good
BUT YOU DONT HAFTA KNOW IT. I still need to know if the stuff sounds alright and junk!
Name: LA
LJ: o-chama
E-Mail: Laptrsn@gmail.com
IM: kyosohmagurl13
Characters played at Discedo: Hatsuharu Sohma moarcowbell
Character's Name: Tetsunosuke Ichumura
Series: Peacemaker Kurogane
Timeline: Chapter 19
Canon Resource Link: The most info I could find about him [ Tetsunosuke Info ]
Personality: Tetsunosuke Ichimura is an excitable and somewhat bratty child. His brat like actions go hand in hand with his determination which he has shown countless times. He had to watch his parents die in front of him when he was younger and that has left a big scar on him. Because of this incident the thing he is most determined about is seeking revenge on the person who killed them. The only way to do that is to join the Shinsengumi. Tetsu is rather impulsive and quick to act without thinking. He does many things to prove himself. These reasons are a big factor in why Hijikata changed his mind and allowed Tetsu into the group.
Being so young, Tetsu has a bit of a rebellious streak in him. He doesn’t enjoy listening to anything the adults tell him and hates having to follow orders. Being made into Hijikata’s page makes this all the more horrible for him. He often ignores orders anyone tells him and often gets into trouble with Hijikata or Susumu because of it. He wants to do the things he wants to do which right now is being a full member of the Shinsengumi. He sees things like page work and anything like that as holding him back from his goal.
Despite all his rebelliousness and serious attitude, he can be really excitable and fun as well. He’s still just a kid so he enjoys playing around when he can. He can easily make friends with his happy nature. Tetsu likes to have a nice time and enjoys talking to other people. He likes making new friends and going on adventures with them. He’s also the type of person to start out hating someone and slowly become their friend. He also has a kind heart and wants to help out others in need. He’s shown this when his at the time 'enemy' Susumu was going through a rough time with the death of his sister. Tetsu knocked some sense into Susumu and when he sat up on the roof of the Shinsengumi headquarters, Tetsu sat up with him the whole time holding his hand. He didn’t need to say a thing because the fact that he was there made it less painful for Susumu. After that Tetsu made it his best interest to befriend Susumu and now enjoys teaching him many things, like games he never got to learn.
He also has a hot temper that seems to entice people to pick on him rather than befriend him. Tetsu will snap so fast at anyone teasing him and can’t often take a joke when he is being picked on. Because of this many of the older members of the Shinsengumi love messing with him for his small height and his short temper that is almost like a tiny puppy yipping for attention.
Tetsu is also easy to hurt and frighten. He wants to become stronger so he can perform his goal, but he still has many obstacles in his way. The scar that was left in his heart from witnessing his parent’s deaths is so big it will take a long time to heal. He is always trying to fight past this handicap of his, but it’s not so easy for him. When bad things happen to him he reverts back to that day of the deaths and curls up into a ball in the smallest place he can find and stays there for weeks. It’s like his security measure, the only way he feels safe.
He is filled with so much inside him that the stress is what keeps him so short. It’s a lot to take on as a kid, but joining the Shinsengumi very slowly is helping him become a stronger man.
What your character can offer: He’s rather an impulsive little punk. Without thinking he will rush off into dangerous situations which may or may not be the best at times. He isn’t the best listener when it comes to authority, but he can be very helpful to those in need He has great determination and also empathy for others.
What items will they be bringing with them? : The clothing on his back and maybe a wooden sword.
Third-Person Sample: It was a very sad day at the Shinsengumi headquarters. All the members were paying their last respects for a fallen member who died on duty. She was important to everyone in their own ways and to know she was gone left a shadow over all of them. One person was especially hit hard with the news. This person kept out of everyone’s way and stayed on a rooftop alone in self pity. He had been up there for hours before Tetsu found him. “Didya come up here just to laugh at broken down dog…..or did you just come to watch the pitiful me,” he muttered not even looking up at the red haired teen and shouted with, “Get lost already!” He lifted his head and saw no one around and sighed a bit, but then felt pressure against his back. Tetsu ignoring the comment Susumu, the depressed man, laid against his back and stared into the sky.
“You know… Ayu-nee… her last meal… I didn’t eat the rest of it... I didn’t even eat it warm… I’m sorry… I’m so sorry,” Tetsu had cried out. This had caused the other teen to cry out along with him. They both sat on the roof crying over the woman who had died. Susumu was able to let out the emotions he was feeling. While trying to grasp onto anything, Tetsu grabbed onto Susumu’s hand and squeezed it tight. It was as if Tetsu was telling him he wouldn’t leave. He was telling him he’d stay as long as Susumu needed it. The whole day was left in nearly all silence with little comments here and there. The silence and tears caused them both to fall asleep side by side.
When Susumu had woken up he looked to his side to see Tetsu was gone. He panicked and shot himself up causing his head to hit something else. While Susumu fell one way, the something that turned out to be Tetsu fell the other way. Tetsu rubbed his head and looked over at Susumu and laughed a little. “I thought you rolled off the roof so I was making sure…” he trailed off a little. Susumu just held his head, not looking up at the other. Tetsu sat there for a as the silence became a little awkward. “Hehe I bet Tatsu-nii is getting worried about me. Must be running around like crazy trying to find me,” He replied as he scratched the back of his head with a big sheepish grin. He started climbing down a ladder that was against the roof, but stopped quickly. “Oh, right! Starting tomorrow I’m gonna teach you lots of stuff! Like having fun and junk like that, so you better be ready for it, Susumu!” he said with a big grin.
Susumu just stared at the smaller boy for a bit before he realized something. “What… did you just say?” he asked not sure if what he heard was right. Tetsu looked over at him with his big wide grin. “I said I’m going to be teaching you a lot of stuff. You need to learn how to have fun, and I’m your teacher from now on.” Susumu stared a bit closer and replied,” I meant after that.” Tetsu thought about the comment for a bit and then his face went red. He quickly started climbing down the ladder faster. Susumu shook his head a little ‘Guess I heard it correctly then’ he thought to himself. “I always call my friends by their first names alright!” Tetsu shouted at the other teen as he was pretty embarrassed. He slipped down the rest of the way and ran off.
First-Person Sample: [Video]
[The screen clicks on automatically to show a small boy with bright red hair.] Where am I? This is so not home. I swear if Shinpachi-san had anything to do with this!!- -
I know it’s not a dream and I probably didn’t die, ‘cause if that were true, mom and dad would be here-- Eh…whassat?
[He spots the communicator and picks it up. He examines it and holds it upside down trying to check it out.] What is that thing? I ain’t seen something like this before. Dammit and no one’s around to tell me what it is. If I don’t find my way out of here soon I’m going to lose it! OI! IS ANYONE AROUND HERE?! IF YOU DON’T FUCKING SHOW YOURSELF I’M GOING TO BEAT YOU SO BAD! I mean it! I really will! Tch bet no one even heard me.
Hey, I bet I can find someone if I look around. At least I can run around without Tatsu following at my heels! [He grins into the comm and runs off while dropping the comm to the ground and it clicks off.]
Now please don't think you have to be super gentle with me. I honestly want to know if it sounds good or not. If you think something should be taken out tell me. If I should redo one or both of the samples tell me. I just wanna make this app really good and I can with your honest opinions.
Okay so
Last night I finished an app for this game and stuff, but me being me I kinda suck at grammar and stuff
so I am posting my app here
and I was wondering if any of you would like to beta my app? If you know PEACEMAKER KUROGANE it would be awesome if you could tell me if my samples are good
BUT YOU DONT HAFTA KNOW IT. I still need to know if the stuff sounds alright and junk!
Name: LA
LJ: o-chama
E-Mail: Laptrsn@gmail.com
IM: kyosohmagurl13
Characters played at Discedo: Hatsuharu Sohma moarcowbell
Character's Name: Tetsunosuke Ichumura
Series: Peacemaker Kurogane
Timeline: Chapter 19
Canon Resource Link: The most info I could find about him [ Tetsunosuke Info ]
Personality: Tetsunosuke Ichimura is an excitable and somewhat bratty child. His brat like actions go hand in hand with his determination which he has shown countless times. He had to watch his parents die in front of him when he was younger and that has left a big scar on him. Because of this incident the thing he is most determined about is seeking revenge on the person who killed them. The only way to do that is to join the Shinsengumi. Tetsu is rather impulsive and quick to act without thinking. He does many things to prove himself. These reasons are a big factor in why Hijikata changed his mind and allowed Tetsu into the group.
Being so young, Tetsu has a bit of a rebellious streak in him. He doesn’t enjoy listening to anything the adults tell him and hates having to follow orders. Being made into Hijikata’s page makes this all the more horrible for him. He often ignores orders anyone tells him and often gets into trouble with Hijikata or Susumu because of it. He wants to do the things he wants to do which right now is being a full member of the Shinsengumi. He sees things like page work and anything like that as holding him back from his goal.
Despite all his rebelliousness and serious attitude, he can be really excitable and fun as well. He’s still just a kid so he enjoys playing around when he can. He can easily make friends with his happy nature. Tetsu likes to have a nice time and enjoys talking to other people. He likes making new friends and going on adventures with them. He’s also the type of person to start out hating someone and slowly become their friend. He also has a kind heart and wants to help out others in need. He’s shown this when his at the time 'enemy' Susumu was going through a rough time with the death of his sister. Tetsu knocked some sense into Susumu and when he sat up on the roof of the Shinsengumi headquarters, Tetsu sat up with him the whole time holding his hand. He didn’t need to say a thing because the fact that he was there made it less painful for Susumu. After that Tetsu made it his best interest to befriend Susumu and now enjoys teaching him many things, like games he never got to learn.
He also has a hot temper that seems to entice people to pick on him rather than befriend him. Tetsu will snap so fast at anyone teasing him and can’t often take a joke when he is being picked on. Because of this many of the older members of the Shinsengumi love messing with him for his small height and his short temper that is almost like a tiny puppy yipping for attention.
Tetsu is also easy to hurt and frighten. He wants to become stronger so he can perform his goal, but he still has many obstacles in his way. The scar that was left in his heart from witnessing his parent’s deaths is so big it will take a long time to heal. He is always trying to fight past this handicap of his, but it’s not so easy for him. When bad things happen to him he reverts back to that day of the deaths and curls up into a ball in the smallest place he can find and stays there for weeks. It’s like his security measure, the only way he feels safe.
He is filled with so much inside him that the stress is what keeps him so short. It’s a lot to take on as a kid, but joining the Shinsengumi very slowly is helping him become a stronger man.
What your character can offer: He’s rather an impulsive little punk. Without thinking he will rush off into dangerous situations which may or may not be the best at times. He isn’t the best listener when it comes to authority, but he can be very helpful to those in need He has great determination and also empathy for others.
What items will they be bringing with them? : The clothing on his back and maybe a wooden sword.
Third-Person Sample: It was a very sad day at the Shinsengumi headquarters. All the members were paying their last respects for a fallen member who died on duty. She was important to everyone in their own ways and to know she was gone left a shadow over all of them. One person was especially hit hard with the news. This person kept out of everyone’s way and stayed on a rooftop alone in self pity. He had been up there for hours before Tetsu found him. “Didya come up here just to laugh at broken down dog…..or did you just come to watch the pitiful me,” he muttered not even looking up at the red haired teen and shouted with, “Get lost already!” He lifted his head and saw no one around and sighed a bit, but then felt pressure against his back. Tetsu ignoring the comment Susumu, the depressed man, laid against his back and stared into the sky.
“You know… Ayu-nee… her last meal… I didn’t eat the rest of it... I didn’t even eat it warm… I’m sorry… I’m so sorry,” Tetsu had cried out. This had caused the other teen to cry out along with him. They both sat on the roof crying over the woman who had died. Susumu was able to let out the emotions he was feeling. While trying to grasp onto anything, Tetsu grabbed onto Susumu’s hand and squeezed it tight. It was as if Tetsu was telling him he wouldn’t leave. He was telling him he’d stay as long as Susumu needed it. The whole day was left in nearly all silence with little comments here and there. The silence and tears caused them both to fall asleep side by side.
When Susumu had woken up he looked to his side to see Tetsu was gone. He panicked and shot himself up causing his head to hit something else. While Susumu fell one way, the something that turned out to be Tetsu fell the other way. Tetsu rubbed his head and looked over at Susumu and laughed a little. “I thought you rolled off the roof so I was making sure…” he trailed off a little. Susumu just held his head, not looking up at the other. Tetsu sat there for a as the silence became a little awkward. “Hehe I bet Tatsu-nii is getting worried about me. Must be running around like crazy trying to find me,” He replied as he scratched the back of his head with a big sheepish grin. He started climbing down a ladder that was against the roof, but stopped quickly. “Oh, right! Starting tomorrow I’m gonna teach you lots of stuff! Like having fun and junk like that, so you better be ready for it, Susumu!” he said with a big grin.
Susumu just stared at the smaller boy for a bit before he realized something. “What… did you just say?” he asked not sure if what he heard was right. Tetsu looked over at him with his big wide grin. “I said I’m going to be teaching you a lot of stuff. You need to learn how to have fun, and I’m your teacher from now on.” Susumu stared a bit closer and replied,” I meant after that.” Tetsu thought about the comment for a bit and then his face went red. He quickly started climbing down the ladder faster. Susumu shook his head a little ‘Guess I heard it correctly then’ he thought to himself. “I always call my friends by their first names alright!” Tetsu shouted at the other teen as he was pretty embarrassed. He slipped down the rest of the way and ran off.
First-Person Sample: [Video]
[The screen clicks on automatically to show a small boy with bright red hair.] Where am I? This is so not home. I swear if Shinpachi-san had anything to do with this!!- -
I know it’s not a dream and I probably didn’t die, ‘cause if that were true, mom and dad would be here-- Eh…whassat?
[He spots the communicator and picks it up. He examines it and holds it upside down trying to check it out.] What is that thing? I ain’t seen something like this before. Dammit and no one’s around to tell me what it is. If I don’t find my way out of here soon I’m going to lose it! OI! IS ANYONE AROUND HERE?! IF YOU DON’T FUCKING SHOW YOURSELF I’M GOING TO BEAT YOU SO BAD! I mean it! I really will! Tch bet no one even heard me.
Hey, I bet I can find someone if I look around. At least I can run around without Tatsu following at my heels! [He grins into the comm and runs off while dropping the comm to the ground and it clicks off.]
Now please don't think you have to be super gentle with me. I honestly want to know if it sounds good or not. If you think something should be taken out tell me. If I should redo one or both of the samples tell me. I just wanna make this app really good and I can with your honest opinions.