[ILC12] Fated Intuition

May 29, 2011 09:02

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: TeukChul/Heeteuk
Genre: AU!General, Romance, Minor!Comedy
Disclaimer: I don't own any SuJu member.
Beta: paradigm_twist
IL/Pairing Assigner: rssj1314 & shadowcrawler12
[Challenge][Y][FF] Summary: Fate is a fickle thing that often brings people together, except even fate needs a helping hand every now and then.

“They don't call him a genius for nothing, you know. )

c: heechul, challenge♣initial line, | length: one-shots, type: fanfiction, c: leeteuk, type: yaoi, pairing: teukchul

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rssj1314 May 30 2011, 06:54:38 UTC
SOOOO! Don't have to be sorry or anything, I wasn't blaming you! (Besides, what did I tell you about saying sorry? >=[) I was late posting last time, so it's only right you get to post late once, too. lol.

ANYWAYS! I almost cried at the end 'cause I thought Yesung (which, you would use Yesung. lol) and Heechul had a bet or something and Heechul wasn't serious... but then I realized if it was a bet, Heechul woulda won, but Heechul paid Yesung instead.. so yeah, it clicked. lol. (I read it while I was half asleep at 7am in the morning >.> which, I woulda commented then.. but was too sleepy/incoherent).

This was so cute ;A; I loved it! And I love how Leeteuk got all shy (or quiet...) when the fortune teller, or Yesung, was like they were the perfect match.. or totally compatible.. or something. (I promise I'll re-read this, just to make sure I didn't miss something while I read it in the morning). I also loved when Leeteuk asked Heechul the questions and Heechul was trying to be all cool about it. Smooth. Very smooth.

Nyx, you made this couple super adorable! You did not disappoint! I was sooooooooo anticipating this!!! It was awesome!

Love,
♥Lien

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